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Read MoreI love you so much more than words could ever say I know it sounds cliché but it’s the simple truth I could pen a million poems ‘til my dying day I’ve been trying to convey it since my days of youth I’ve...
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Thank you very much Styxian. I’ve been trying to have more control over that meter and syllable count the pieces flow, so it’s a little more work but I’m liking it so far.
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Beautifully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
I find myself more immersed in trying to stay with that meter and syllable count with my latest work but I’m enjoying it.
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Professionally done, Wally. Each followed the same syllable count and I like the alternating rhyme scheme. And for the meaning, I think the chosen words are just right to convey the yearnings of the heart. 🙂
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Thank you Tim. I’ve been working more on that lately. I usually go off script or rhythm, or make the lines longer with internal rhyme added with wordplay. I have several goals for 2026 and hope to up my game.
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Read MoreThe big bad heart “Maybe I possess the big bad heart that thunders within this wolf body.” The big bad tongue “Maybe I can lick clean your bones with my big bad tongue!” The big bad she-wolf “Maybe...
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Wolves are back! Big bad and naughty wolves. The Wolves you are writing about seem to be more seductive and haunting than threatening.
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I am slogging at the library right now reading through the first draft making revisions. About to transcribe it from my notebook to the computer so I can send it to you finally. Ughhhhhh writing is such a process, Elke! Haha 😂
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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I found most of them cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That’s great.;))
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cool idea!
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Thank you 😊 🩷
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Interesting
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Thank you ;))
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Damian was the one that stood out right away. Interesting, I don’t think I’ve seen a puzzle as a poem before.
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Thank you. I just wanted to have some fun with finding the writers in a puzzle.
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Read MoreIntimacy left the bedroom, drifted quietly down the street. Wanting only human closeness, with no intent to cheat. It wandered past the neighbours, took a shortcut through the park. Noticed couples leaning inwards, who had not lost their spark. It walked backed twenty paces, sat beside a nameless...
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian…..watch out for those Gnomes.
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I love the idea of this, the imagery. The whole gnome part almost, but not quite, adds a whimsy to it. Yet the despair overcomes that brief slide towards “not so bad”. The ending is perfect. The whole write is great stuff.
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Cool write Peter. Very creative.
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Read MoreThe silence is deafening, and profound Her absence makes the night feel so cold The air escaped his lungs now he drowns In the depths of hope taking a toll He prays amidst the ruins and ashes Yearning for that burning eternal flame Like impressions...
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Beautiful and a sorrowful piece ❤️
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Thank you Fia. It’s those writes that haunt that more profound…and everlasting.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian, I’m kind of fond of this one for some reason.
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This is almost a cautionary tale. One never knows how life will go when someone you once imagined as a safe haven and one so desired disappears. Well done, Wally.
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Very true Tim. Sometimes unrequited or absent love makes for poetry with depth and longing.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
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Well now, this is quite loaded with some serious wording! Not easy I am sure, to carry the rhymes along as you did.
And, it’s a rewarding read, that I enjoyed very much.