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    Storms Breath

    The dust of remains Tuck in the dead Never leave crevices vacantĀ  Or wrinkles clean Land is always ready for sweepingĀ  Ā  With traces of existence I bring back faces Forgotten since the first grainĀ  Expressionless Ā  Fall through graspsĀ  Stick onto wounds Grind down to a being less Someone who never was But...

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    edge

    innocence is sad, you don't understand my maladystuck between two worlds, I shine then withdrawyour voice calls me forwardwith much trepidation I comeentering into an understanding with youyou will not scrutinize me harshlymy one vulnerability, I shy in the...

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    • One of the purest you are, Brenda when it comes to
      excavating the realms of intimacy. So, so enamored with this vibe…you get it!!

      Poetic love always

      Naaj

    • Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend, I concur with Naaj. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • There is a sweet aching vulnerability to strip away the artifice and stand still long enough to be seen. This is beautiful, Crimsin.

    • This is filled with intimacy. We all look for a sanctuary to feel cherished. Loved this:)

    • hello beautiful Adelphina thank you graciously for a very beautiful comment have a great day ❤️

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    Outta Place, Outta Time

    Ā  Have you ever found yourself having a dream Where you couldn’t quite figure out the place or time? Like old faces you’ve seen or places you’ve been And yet something along the way doesn’t align? Ā  It’s not really a nostalgic trip down memory...

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    • Yes. When things do not seem align and the path splits, then come back together to take you on a different road. I have

      • Thank you Fia. I know I’m not the only one and yet the familiarity of something unknown can be a little confusing and amusing. Perhaps the parallel universe of our other selves, or just our brains needing some good sleep.

    • hello Wally yes I have on a lot of occassions strangers I apparently know in the dream is often or my home being another house I seemed to live in this sleep state that doesn’t align with the present… some of my past lives were apparently disturbing if my dreams are to be believed great write ❤️

      • Crim, great to hear from you. Yes, its as if the subconscious is sending messages across time and we’re reliving moments that don’t align. That’s why I love listening to music while writing.

    • Powerfully penned, Wally. You’re definitely not alone my friend, I can relate. Excellent write. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you Damian. Yes, I like that in a way this can be relatable to many. It means that universe is talking to us and we poets are the ones to capture these momentary lapses of thoughts and time.

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    soul

    so often you are in my thoughtstouch the softness withinand realize you are lovedif we never touch in the fleshunderstand you are a part of my soulthe living and breathing partto know an angel, is to know youdon't get...

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    Masseuse on a Mission

    Have you ever had a massage that was so intense that the muscles in your stomach cramped up. OMG The woman almost had me begging to stop. I needed the massage for my back, but my stomach was protesting. When she decided...

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    • LOL.
      Sounds like nirvana. Yeah?
      I myself am kinda weird perhaps, in that I’m not a touchy guy with strangers on me. Yet in personal life I am very touching and receive it well. I think it’s a comfort thing. I’ve had a combative life from early on, so hands on usually meant aggression.
      So no, I’ve never had a professional massage, nor do I ever want one. I’ve done physical therapy for injuries, etc. But that is not the same as going limp and letting some stranger be all on me. I get more tense. LOL.
      Luckily I have Del, who brings out my comfort zones wonderfully.
      As for your experience, i take it that you will want a follow up, in due time? LOL

      • I think I need to take some muscle relaxers for a while. I am definitely carrying a white bandana next to show the sign of I surrender. lol

    • Cleverly penned, Fia. Who knew getting massages could turn so dangerous. lol. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

      Damian

    • The massage is indeed a very ancient form of healing, relief, spiritual elevation. But there is very little of anything good without the pain of releasing. Great piece Lady

    • OUCH… the muscles in my stomach usually cramp up after the massage … and that is usually not the result of the massage… but that can work as well… ok stop rolling your eyes… you had to mention the massage didn’t you?!?!?!?

    • Mmmm…this is givin me flashbacks of hot coals on my neck
      while my dainty masseuse slow walked down spine. Shit…it was either tap out or pass out
      Sexy write indeed, lady

      Much respect

      Naaj

    • Hahahaha. I’m glad you lived to tell the tale! You had me smiling the whole write. lol
      I love a good message. I went once for a birthday party. The birthday girl had her hair braided so when she came out it was all messed up. Like she was in a fight or something but she said it was a head message. Sometimes I wonder! Lol

    • I’m pretty sure this is one of those that can be taken in more than one way .. I certainly love a decent massage .. and I am also acutely aware there is a certain point of pleasure where blurring occurs & gets confused with pain .. like I said, there is a certain point that will vary from one individual to another .. I’m talking about thresholds here & poetry .. Nice .. Neville 😎👍

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