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Nice slide rhyme and repetition…
Solid imagery in [pioneer’s compass]…
I had a new idea for implementation
of imagery…Do something like a Carlos Williams
Red Barrel…Like just insert in…
In a unique and strange way…
Or do such a thing at multiple
sites in the poem…Perhaps with multiple separate
images…
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About that sleepover you wanted, Peter, I suddenly remembered I’m busy that night. I don’t recall the night, but I’m sure I’m busy. By the way, how do you like the AI voice read of this piece at the end?
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a purple winter night
- April 4, 2026
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Sinister. The metaphors cut like a sharp ass knife. Nice work!