“Tasting the self I wish was dead”

That line rattled my skull with its power and relatability. I wonder how many of us walk this, talk this and live it…

I swear it’s a very strange thing we are often on similar wavelengths interesting great write ❤️

Thank you, Brenda.

Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thia is a deeply moving poem, Crimsin. I felt especially those last 3 line. And the music made the poem more real to me, more tragic. To desire death, yet condemned to life, where only sadness can be found. And yet, there is also the deeply felt desire to be “understood”. Crimsin, you may not want anyone in your “onyx tower”, but your poem calls to us nonetheless. Is this not an invitation to at least feel your words?

You write powerfully, Crimsin.

Curt

hello dearest Curt of course it is I hope to move always that you got it makes me happy thank you ❤️