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Aww, no sad bittersweet stuff!
Okay, this is good and it hits the heart in the center. I feel it, through your words.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This write has a gentle sting to it.
You do both so well. Gentle and sting.
I love when you blend Brenda.
Just the right amount of bittersweet.Merry Christmas!
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Read Morelaughter of hate, inside me debating whether to stay or leavecallous affection is the affliction, as of latemorose of feeling, with lust shown for others and for me nonededicated need holds me to youa love that hurts dictates desireinside...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Heartfelt write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Chère C.,
A thumbs up from the Netherlands.
And what do the world famous Macs says?
I’m loving it.
Your writes I mean. I’m not eating the Macs.
I hope your Tuesday will be marvellous, Gus
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Read MoreI wish you would hear my emotions ascend and screamFrom the depths a stream of consciousness flowingLike a huge wall of sound swelling within a dreamMaybe then you could give this poem a title Like tidal waves slowly rising on...
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hello dearest Wallly this poem says how I feel…I asked God today if there was any real love you know two people really loving each other…great write ❤️
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hi crim, hope you’re doing well. Thank you. Yes, it’s difficult to find a soul mate in today’s world, even though her and I went through different paths for a decade we found each other again. Hope you had a great Christmas and wishing you a happy new year.
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Powerfully penned, Wally. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Damian. Hope you’re doing well sir.
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Read MoreMy name is Billy Bedoe, and in the sweltering summer of 1969, I encountered the devil incarnate. Her name was Jolie Wheeler, who was 57 years old at the time, and what we nowadays know as a psychopath. I...
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Cool intro/ Looking forward to you unpacking this suspense thriller some more
Much respect
Naaj
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Read MoreShall I tell you a story or keep it in a poem Shall I tell you a story or take you home Some verses are hidden secrets that should not be spilled love requited and forbidden but if I tell you, my lips would not be...
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So this is your song if only…I like it.
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Thank you, appreciate that;))
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A song played on a radio, as a teen-aged girl dreams of that secret crush she has. I’m sure that this lyrical gem has been played for so many young women, and men. It’s called a crush because thats what it feels like in our chests, huh!
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Yes your right. A crush feels like our chests is being crushed. Thank you for the comment
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. I really like this a lot. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian:)) appreciate that
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Chère F.,
Every time I discover more reasons to love your write to bits.
And this is also such an event.
At the end of your poem, you offer a possibility to choose. Simply wonderful, but it reminds me of a song I once wrote. A long long time ago. And its title is Bevrijdingsdag. Translated: liberation day. I wouldn’t write a song with such a title today, but that’s another story.The chorus of the song is forceful and perhaps a bit extreme. It translates like this:
You said ‘Married’ – and I said so what
I’d love to choose if I may
Don’t talk to me about divorce
Everyday’s liberation dayAnd then I asked the public:
You’ve heard it. She said ‘married’. But didn’t say who is married, so it’s up to you to choose.
– is he married
– is she married
– are they both married, but not to each otherRaise your hands!
And I would let the public decide. And I would have three songs ready to fit the decision.
A situation, prone to personal ‘colouring’. My personal colouring that is. I’m not On a stage for nothing.Yes, a bit of a long reply. But maybe an idea 💡 for if and when you’re going to do some beat poetry. The public will love you all the more for this kind of surprises. Really.
I’m a huge fan of open mic evenings; maybe I can transfer some of the excitement to you.
Other than that: keep them coming, please.Warm regards, Gus
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I do not mind long replies. I am happy that this ignited a memory and that you are encouraging me to do open mic. I would love to read it. No worries. I will use a translator. Thank you for loving my work. poems and stories.
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Very nice indeed ma’am .. Neville 😎🌻👍
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Thank you, Neville;))
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Chère C.,
How can you be so productive and, at the same time, be so consistent in quality?
Looks like I enjoy everything you write.
Just a note from the far away fanclub.
Warm regards, Gus