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Read MoreThe bed thumps rhythmically beneath you while youmake a grocery listand notice the weirdwater stain by the edge of the ceiling fanthe pace increases soyou stifle a half-assed moan and tilt your pelvis and wonderis thisis this…and you wait...
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Thanks Damian, I appreciate you right back.
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Oh-Wow! I absolutely loved this, Betty. Best wishes, Harriet-Jacqui Furl, published erotica author
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Thank you HJ. Back atcha!
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Betty love your writes. Wooo
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Thank you my sweet friend.
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Your pieces are always so stimulating Lady, to tight
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Hey ME!
It is tight as hell, my friend! (Kegals doncha know.)
Thanks my friend. Good to see you.
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What! Betty graces us with some creative writing here! Or, also known as Lillith has entered Eden! What!
“forearm against your pelvis” = Details are everything, and this is exquisitely precise to make it a real moment. That bit of control is boss!
Well you had mentioned that you were going to concentrate on erotica. So that explains this humdinger of a write!
The way you make it so realistic, without any overly porn promotion, shows your skill, ahem, at creative writing.
Good to see you donating to the site. It’s about time!-
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My sweet, innocent brother-from-another-mother.
No, this was just some older stuff dusted off.
I have yet to write the porn.
It’s gonna be like a Gallagher show, you’ll need visqueen sheeting to avoid the splash zone.
JUST KIDDING…
MaybeHey, bro, thanks. I fucking adore you. Your critique matters and I really appreciate you for it. Thank you for being a fucking icon.
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Icon? Don’t be calling me no foreign little car made by Hundai !! I’m tall dammit!
Okay okay.
You are a premium writer, Betty. Any site goes up in value with you posting in it. It isn’t always about the subject matter. It’s the technique and ability of the writer that carries the weight. You are gold. -
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Gotta love the raw honesty spilling onto the page without restraint. “Are those your toes curling in the sheets?” it’s that damn good.
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LOL, thanks Wally. I appreciate you!
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Make the writing the center is one of those ideas that you sit and think about what a poet or a writer does. It is their center. Interesting piece.
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Thank you Fia…
Much appreciated…
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hello dearest Cipher the message here is awesome and beauti❤️ful
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Awww…
Thank you Bren…
Got the warm n fuzzies…
<#3
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Read MoreLiving this Dream Through the looking glass of The dream of: You. Sharp movement of pen upon pearl white page.You practice the practice of poetry, craft of crafts. Connecting to portals of existence, everywhere a window. Shutting out the sound of silence, accessing the words of the wilds, molding the...
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Read MoreLiving this Dream Across arid airs and vast wastelandsLayered lairs, places - without care or cares. Tis there – Where A hand picks up a pen Eyes, poetic wheels, beginning to spin Upon a poetic wheel:Giving it a Spin. A battle on The frontiers of self. To lose Or To...
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Passionately penned, Betty. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian