I have never been in the path of a tornado. But I have been in my share of storms that I should have listened to clear out. Strongly felt piece

Powerfully penned, CG. Excellent write with precise imagery my friend. Outstanding visuals as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

You’re right, Tim. Animals always seem to sense what we try to ignore. My dogs know before me.

A slight bulge appeared below my waist… 😘 Terrific erotic piece.

Passionately penned, CG. A very steamy write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

If it softened something inside you, then the piece did its job. Thank you, truly.

Tim, you always know how to phrase things. I’ll happily take that reaction. 😉

Damian, you’re a gem. I’m really glad the warmth and heat landed for you. Your support never goes unnoticed.

Adel that kicked out of the garden where there is nowhere to go. That is a good line. Enjoyed this piece

Every single line felt .. and felt deeply .. no effort required to feel where you are coming from .. and with much respect, much respect & write on, because you do it so well Neville 😎🌻👍

Hi Tim!! Hahaha.
Hell yeah, I said move out of the way and took two bites instead of one. Hehehe
What can I say, listening to Nirvana got me in a mood. Especially the opening line where he sang -I’m on my time with everyone.
I don’t know, i felt like why wait, i’ll take a bite of that apple right now. And it grew from there.

Like I was telling Damien. Follow what feeds your spirit in a positive way. Whatever that may be.
As simple as it sounds do what makes you happy:)

Thanks for your snaps on my write amigo!

Thanks Damien,
I truly don’t believe there is a wrong religion. As long as it isn’t hurting anyone and feeding your spirit positively.
For me it’s also geographical and cultural. I’m Hispanic and was raised with the Catholic Church so that is what I practiced as a young adult. As I got older I got curious about other religions. And I can thank the late goddess Tina Turner for that. Yes I watched the movie What’s love got to do with it! Lol.
She had a strict Baptist upbringing and later in life embraced Buddhism. It’s inspiring:)
You can always change your mind, even when it comes to something so sacred as religion.

Thanks for stopping by amigo!

It’s interesting to me how the movement of this is similar to a snake, it winds its way down. And those last lines are powerful! I have a complicated relationship with faith. What I’ve resolved as my peace is that I don’t believe in religion but I have a deeply spiritual connection with my faith. Great write!

(What Willow said!)

Hey beautiful. I am in love with your energy, as much as everything else about you. This write is a great example of what you can create from that incredible mind of yours. Hell yes I’m partial! But I’m also smart as hell. I know what is worth my life. You and your talents.
Bravo mi amor.