This is so sad. Let me ask you, was the cough tuberculosis? Just curious. To die because of a bird sucks. Kept my attention, liked it. ;))

Cleverly penned, Keith. Incredible storytelling my friend. I always get a kick out of the name generator you use for your stories. I keep waiting for, Charles U. Farley to show up. lol. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautifully penned, DK. Nice balance in this write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Only one word comes to mind here…consumption.
This is one helluva write!

Guard MY heart so I don’t have to feel the ache of loneliness ever again ughhhh hahaha

Great write, Meg!

You bet it will. I’m not stopping at your back either.

Pleasurable, infectious and lovely in it’s delivery & format. Your ideas shine no matter what you write.

I do. I do.

I was trying to make the random word challenge a real pain in the ass…. You proved you can take it … wow

Fantastic ink. I like the feel of devotion, and a bit of sinister.

Meg, this was so well-written! Enjoyed it thoroughly! Wonder who the lucky man is… jealous! 😆

Brilliantly penned, DK. That was hotter than two demons fucking my friend. But the ending was clever and witty. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’m ripe for you, HJ

I have so many of your wet panties stuffed in my pillowcase. The honey like sweetness puts me right to sleep. Delicious piece DK.

An engaging write, makes the person drip in the pants. Well done!

There is some unfinished messages though. 😉

I’m actually under your bed… you left the window open

Yeah, I like to wake up with a shaft inside me… but not one of these.

Stellar writing…
The weaving of words is simply amazing.

You make me smile!
xoxo

Powerful work. Vivid and sharp.

Brilliantly penned, DK. You’ve got mad skills my friend, with the pen of course. Clarification is important sometimes. lol. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Mmmm…the gift and the curse maybe?
This vibe was very imaginative!!
Tight!!

Oh shit…
Thanks for telling me.
No wonder nobody knows what the hell I’m talking bout.

Idk how this poem slipped out of my radar, but I am glad to catch up and “hunt” few of your poems.

They say a good writing is a writing which makes you feel the want to fuck, destroy and create something all at once. I guess I am having that feeling again!

Woow ❣️❤️‍🔥

I mean, it’s a good question right?! Glad you enjoyed, thank you.

xx
~P.G💋

HJ it is always such a pleasure having you in my comment section. So glad you got a good feel 😉 xx

Mission accomplished! ❤️
xx

Passionately penned, P.G. Might I add while it did got hot in here, that this is also a very clever write my friend. Love breaking the 4th wall much? lol. That was really cool actually giving the reader a role inside the fantasy, by the way it occurs to me if you didn’t intend it that way and were somehow unaware, that I might have just opened Pandora’s box. I’m going with you intended it that way. Fantastic spill. Appreciate you.

Damian

Erotica with humor woven into it hehe 😜 I like that! Bravo!

Daniel

I am not late to this party just late in commenting. lol
Woman! Omg fire is not the word, more like a sticky inferno of sexual domination. Love it.

Playing with fire burns,
As these hot lines playing with us.

Shh..I’ve got the keys. But not now.

Well played out erotic scene. Loved how the anticipation bult as the story unfolded. And loved the playful reactions you had as he orchestrated your pleasure.

John