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Read MoreShe has a problemShe worships drugsShe has a boyfriend who is a dealer & userShe just recently gave birth to a baby girlThey live in this crack house that you wouldn't send your worst enemy to live inFilth, roaches,...
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It is sad. Thank you Brenda. xo
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, unfortunately the daily truths of this world are quite evil. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sad but true Damian. Thanks my friend.
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People who deal and push the drugs are the demons. The innocents are always the one that suffers.
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Oh so true Fia. Appreciate the comments.
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Read MoreShe hated violence and sexShe believed to much of it was ruining our youthShe made sure her two sons aged 11 & 14 weren't exposed to this smut anywhere in lifeShe has a drinking problemOften, she would monitor their...
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I just read a story about a mother like this and the kid killed his mother and a sibling I think he was driven to it… you can’t shelter them that much and expect they would be okay… too bad the boys died great write ❤️
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Thank you Brenda. Too many sickos out there. Appreciate it!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Pricks live forever. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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HA! Yes. Pricks do live forever! Thanks man.
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There are only so many things we can shelter our kids from. And even then, it doesn’t last forever. Still didn’t see this one coming….you always keep my on my toes my dear friend. xx
~P.G💋
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Absolutely correct. This women was out of her mind. A true nut job. Thanks PG xo
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Read MoreI’m not weak. And to be honest, I’m not strong either.. I’m the perfect balance of both; I’d bet that you are neither. Your weakness of the flesh, with your emotions suppressed, drowning in temptation, but oh sweet baby, I’ve not tempted you yet. I’m resistant to...
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Keep on, keepin’ on. It’s great!
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Thank you xx
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The flow is perfect and I the defiance at the end fits this poem so well. I like it.
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Defiance is one of my strong suits. Thank you, dearest Fia. xx
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Well phrased battle of wills 🌼
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I appreciate it. xx
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Great flow and a very smart human, to tight
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I thank you dear. xx
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Great write PG.
Those that yield to temptation fail to see the price they have to pay and often become addicted to choice of drug…. booze,food,gambling ,porn,sex,excersise etc.To yield occasionally is being human…💋
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Absolutely Peter, you get it. The price is too high, and I am too cheap. 😉 Thanks for reading. xx
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I agree with Fia, “defiance” suits this poem well. Not to mention the flow of this piece!
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Daniel, thank you. Wasn’t there a saying about defiant girls? Or does my memory fail me? lol xx
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Phenomenal piece. Nicely said and executed!
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Keith, you are always appreciated my dear friend. Thank you for reading. xx
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Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend, I always love the layers in your writes. Always something bubbling underneath the surface. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dearest Damian, I have to keep things exciting. Thank you for reading, it’s always a pleasure. xx
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Read Moregirl, you been sitting on that barstool but you ain't drinking you running or thinking?cuz I know the look in those eyesstare into the darkness they can't hideevery nightwhat's on your mind? I’ve been on the outside looking inonly my past knows...
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Perhaps! The best poem that I have read on Stars. I am not very good with comments, but this one grabbed my soul, Lady! This one deserves an award.
Al
PS. Keep in touch.
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Mary and I thank you from the bottom of our hearts. This was an expression long in the building and much in need of voice.
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Powerhouse,both of you are amazing women.
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Thank you so much, Thomas. We greatly appreciate you
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Really love this, the two of you simply rock Ladies
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We needed to give this one its moment. Thank you so much on behalf of both of us
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Powerfully penned, Willow & Mary. I love the guitar riff in this, and have got to ask what was that? A cello or violin at the beginning and end with a distorted effect on it. Whoever made that call, that was pretty cool. Nice collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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That was indeed a cello! That was my call. Cello has the same deep gut effect as bass…which is my obsession. Mary digs violin more. But I’m rubbing off on her. 😉 We poured ourselves into this one. Thank you so much, my friend
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This is one inspirational powerhouse of a collab
Take a bow, ladies.
Ya’ll have definitely outdone yourselvesMuch respect
Naaj
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Thank you so much, Naaj. This was a labor of love and a reignition for us both. I’ll pass along your words to Mary 😊
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