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Read MoreI met duck pond Debbie before computersbefore answering machinesbefore...well, I better stop.I'm not sure met is the right word.I was five years old (maybe four, maybe six)Life hadn't beaten the crap out of me yet,so I was friendly and...
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Thanks!
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I would have felt uneasy with her reaction too. It was a seed that planted a doubt that something was done and did wrong when there was nothing done wrong.
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Thank you, Fia.
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I don’t trust anyone named Debbie with the exception of Debbie Harry and the adult star in Debbie Does Dallas. Triple D mind you …
The rest of the Debbie’s can suck my ass ….
BIG WENDY LIKE
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Big thanks. It’s funny how names impact us. I have a good friend named Debbie, so she has helped blot out the mini bitch Debbie. I attract a lot of Steves, but maybe that’s because about 1 out of 3 guys used to be named Steve.
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Read MoreShe was a teenage virgin cashierFrom some Dixie state far from hereUntil one dayI asked her out on a dateShe said sure why notI just can't tell my pop One cold night in NovemberThis is the story that I rememberWe...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Looks like we got a double feature of horror tonight. You gotta beware of a gang of Raccoons, carrying the Bubonic Plague my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Those suckers are dangerous. Thanks my friend.
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Vivid and sharp. Powerful work.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciated.
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This starts like a teenage hookup and switch to the exorcist and end like Evil dead. But why The Ring poster?! Lol
A poem that I enjoy seeing in a movie. Well done, my friend! “)
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Thanks M.E. The Ring poster was something that kind of looked fucked up and I felt it fit the look I was going for the girls rabid transformation. Thanks for the read & comments.
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You do love to scare the bejesus out of me. Good poem;))
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Glad you were scared. Thanks Fia!!
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Read MoreKind of sick of my wifeThis marriage is getting the best of meAll she does is complain, nag, whine and bark ordersI could divorce herI could up & leaveI'm just lazy I guessI zone out most of the timeI'll...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. The Dr. Seuss of horror, my friend. I saw the toaster image and knew it was going to be used as an instrument of death. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Always my friend. Thank you for the kind words.
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As soon as I read toast and bathtub I guessed it. Damn! What an ending!
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Of course! Toasters and water don’t mix to well. Thanks my friend.
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Read MoreConnie was only six when she was discovered gazing at a dead rat by Madame Jenny TaylorMadame once assoluta at the Ivaninski's, informed the Linguses that the child was to be her pupilLong years of study began in her...
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This is so sad. Let me ask you, was the cough tuberculosis? Just curious. To die because of a bird sucks. Kept my attention, liked it. ;))
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Yes it was. Thanks Fia.
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Incredible storytelling my friend. I always get a kick out of the name generator you use for your stories. I keep waiting for, Charles U. Farley to show up. lol. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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HA! Maybe for the next write. Thank you for the support.
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Intriguing story. Nicely written.