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Don’t feel sorry for him. I heard he was a troublemaker. Thanks Fia.
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Shit happens.. Again one of your wonderfully sarcastic poems, dear Keith!
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Yes it does. Thanks Elke.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. It’s that time of year, when you tell halloween stories. With a name like, Rusty Trombone, he was dealt a bad hand from the start. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It is October. Let’s get crazy. Thanks Damian.
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Your halloweenish spooky words are the best for the month…
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Your comments fulfill my devilish ideas. Thanks PAR.
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Read MoreA teenage girl somewhere anywhere was busy text messaging friends on her cell phone a month ago.She was walking along a set of railroad tracks.Although deaf since birth, she had frequently proclaimed that she could avoid danger more easily...
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That’s some heavy fucking irony, Keith. The title reminded of an old song, though it had to do with trains it wasn’t this twisted. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hi Damian. I’m familiar with that old track. The Yardbirds & Aerosmith covered it. Thanks for the feedback friend.
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Gotta be on your toes. Getting too comfortable can get you hurt.
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Absolutely. People today are so oblivious of their surroundings. That was one of the reasons why I wrote this piece. Thanks Adelphina.
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Scrumptious minced blind meat…
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Come one, come all for this delectable treat. Thanks PAR.
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Read MoreThey say it was written in the stars. I say I want to write with themI want to fly up on my magic carpet of shimmering garnets submerge my vial of fingertips. with their...
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I don’t remember this one? It’s awesome! I like the liberation that it implies, because creative writing is indeed a form of freedom. This is a very strong write, Del. I can see why you love it so. As do I!
I’m so happy to see you posting in here. As some others are as well, I’m sure!
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Yeah, I think I posted it on DUP before you were there. It was one of those writes that wrote itself.
I had the title. Just needed to write it. Thanks for you snaps on this write:)
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent write, again your imagery is crisp and precise. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey Damian! Thank you. I’m trying to be online more. It’s been a busy year.
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I love how this poem blends cosmic imagery with the deeply personal act of creation. The idea of writing with stars, leaving luminous fingerprints on an infinite slate, beautifully captures the timelessness and universality of poetry. It feels both expansive and grounded, as if the cosmos and the earth are woven together through the poet’s words.
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Sometimes when I listen to music it gives me images and I was listening to The Black Keys the song was called Little Black Submarines. It inspired everything for this write!
Thank you for such a wonderful comment
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Read MoreI was carved from the oldest tree by strange things in the beginning ancient things that dance and spill blood The music was sharp and cut deep into my creation of stings...
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I’ve honestly have only watched the first episode of Stranger Things. but your poem stands powerfully on its own. The imagery is so vivid and eerie, it feels like a story in itself.
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In the fourth season there is a character that plays the song from Metallica. So epic!!!! I put the link below in case you’re curious. I haven’t been writing the past year. I’ve been busy trying new things so your comment means the world.
Thanks for stopping by:)
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Wow this is dark. I remember the show. Nicely written.
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Hey Fia. Thank you!
I wrote this yesterday trying to find my mojo. lol
It’s been a while since I’ve sat down and written anything.
I’m going to post more often but it might be some older stuff from DUP.
Im still simmering on my other write about wildflowers.
Fingers crossed I will write something this weekend.Thanks for the support:)
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What! Of course you should’ve been made! All of my bad luck, you are my salvation!
You don’t write “dark” much. But obviously you can when it hits ya. The plethora of details within the write make it full, like a bag of candy when trick or treating. (That black cat I saw a few weeks ago was right outside my front door this evening!).
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Hahahaha. There’s your word plethora!! You crack me up up.
Me a good luck charm? I feel a pandora charm coming on hehehehe
And you can’t take it back. I’m still your salvation but you have to take me shopping for girl stuff!
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I was telling Glen, at work, about my boots you got me! He was asking about when is the hat happening. LOL. I told him I’m more a ball cap guy.
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Well Christmas is around the corner.
I might surprise you!
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Powerfully penned, Adel. Excellent write my friend, this one has darker tones. I dig it. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey there amigo. It’s the month of Halloween!
Now is the time for darker writes:)
I’m going to indulge in my dark side for a minute. lolThanks for the snaps on this write!
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Read MoreHome playing piano Making it beautiful Just for you In your favorite red dress Each heart beat key Bringing me closer for free Fingertip music notes Catching a ride Exhaled at midnight Melody blown kisses For only your ears Devoted to appear Millions of miles away Playing piano...
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Hola! I wondered when you’d share more of your talent! Seems life is good with you Amiga 🌼
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Dude!! I just finished my book. Every poem has an accompanied piece of art! It’s titled Poetry Stained Teeth!
It’s on Amazon!! But to get a printed copy you need to go to Book Baby. It’s who I went through to self publish!!
This is one page of my book! It’s what I’ve been working on all year. Phew. I’m starting my second one!Thanks for checking this out !!
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This is a beautiful take on playing the piano.
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Thanks Fia!
Especially for helping me with posting!
This is another older one from back in DUP days and kind of flirting with Mark. hahaha
It was before we decided to meet. He would always comment and kind of tip toe flirt!
Where I on the other hand was a bit more aggressive. LolThanks for the awesome comment!!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Into the book it belongs! You know how much I love poems that highlight music, excellent write my friend. The art compliments the write nicely. Great to see you posting again. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hey there Damien.
Yes, I have a love for music poems too! I have a few more others I might post here.
Thank you for the snaps on my art! It came out just like I imagined it would. It’s been quite a year putting this together
I’m glad most of it is over. Now I need to try and market! I need pointers amigo!!! HahahaStay cool amigo!
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The pic reminds me of you, of course! Especially the long, beautiful hair! And, I can see you writing, if not playing the piano. Your words are music to my eyes.
This is a “not so secret anymore” wonderful love poem. And I am so frickin lucky to have found you. Your limitless awesome traits. You will always be beautiful, forever. And talented! -
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Hey honey. Thank you!! November can’t come soon enough.
I tried to sleep but I couldn’t so here I am. Hopefully I will tonight
I’ll call you in a bit. Need my coffee time with you!!I love this comment!!! You make me feel so beautiful:)
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i can just imagine you, looking at the picture… your delicate fingers dancing on the piano…n owww woow
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Hi Dimpy! I’m so happy to see you here.
Thank you for the comment:). That is me, my son took it and then I embellished everything else.
I have no idea how to play it but in my mind I’m a pro. HahaI’m glad you enjoyed!
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Yaay, i loved every word…nd i must say here both mom and son are talented…
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Damn was not going to survive anyway. It was his time. I feel sorry for him