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Mmmhmm. Definitely have a sweet tooth in poetry.
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Passionately penned, Fia. You always deliver my friend, great write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Read MoreBlack, white – White, black How many times the rhymes return to: No going backAnd now We have a uniform of nothingness to place upon the form To go out into the storm Like sheep amidst the slaughter. SonDaughter. Sun Moon. Follower Occulted into The cult. Not I: NWP til I Die***Cipher Poems ***
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Superb.
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So are you saying that the uniform, when put on, is a form of accepting an occultist way of being?
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Powerfully penned, Cipher. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreCould you go on If you felt you couldn’t goOn..? Could you be strong if you could no longer be Strong..? Is this the point we reach. As the point of all this..? To be so fucked up You cannot get Up..? Observing the direction existence seems to be swerving for the deserving&Undeserving. I say I...
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Powerfully penned, Cipher. Deep write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreInspired by: Blink-182 – Gohttps://youtu.be/YS1FvpS8tL8?si=ffTn33M7DeFRxbgQyou say you won't leave because it's love but that ain't love I think it's fucked he treats you like a piece of crap gave him all your cash for he could go out drinking with friends when you speak up he...
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Powerful
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Thanks for the read. Much appreciated.
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Holy Damn, Nick. That’s good.
(Take the ‘e’ off your ‘grab’)
I love the refrain. It emphasizes urgency. I like the conversational tone, the second person narrative… the pleading.
This is a gut-wrenching piece, and I can feel it to the core.
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Thanks for the read. Abuse is something that doesn’t get enough notice. I know I grew up around it as well as many friends and family. I think it’s always good to put a light on that issue.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Can feel the emotion in your words, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, friend. The read is very much appreciated.
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