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Read More"How long does she have?" asked the man behind the counter, stooping in his lab coat as he assessed the prescription."The doctor doesn't know. Perhaps a few weeks."The elderly gentleman empathetically smiled, his ocean blue eyes regarding his customer....
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Thank you, M.E.! I like to give you the unexpected…
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Highly imaginative, Lady
Full of suspense sexuality and devotion.
It’s been a while since I have read story telling this good
Reminds me of the old erotica short stories I used to
read when I was youngerGreat job DK
Naaj
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Thanks, Naaj! I’m so glad you liked it. I was looking for something sweet and suspenseful. I accidentally ran into that internal Hawaiian love story when I was studying the flower and incorporated into the piece. It’s legitimate Hawaiian folklore, and I thought it was pretty cool.
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Indie, thank you so much for reading and your specific recommendations. I’m sure you realize that the name, Charlie, was specifically chosen to surprise the reader in the way you mentioned – still, I like your idea to make it more obvious when the curtain finally rises on her identity. I’ll check on the parking lot as well.
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Thank you, HJ! I’m glad you liked it!
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Powerful work. Hot. Well crafted and steamy.
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Thank you, Thomas. I’m glad you liked it.
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Beautifully penned, DK. A steamy erotic write, with fabulous storytelling, and an incredible imagination my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You’re awesome, Damian! Thank you!
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Brilliantly written. Well executed. Sex, sex and more sex. This is some hot motherfucking shit!
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Well, hopefully more than just sex – but thank you! I’m definitely into sex!
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Never cease to impress. Always well written and deep (pun intended) lol. The story flows smoothly and hott hott hott 🔥 😋
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Thank you, Daniel. My goal is to impress you and, well… excite you.
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I keep missing the reply button!
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So are you, girl, and thank you! No apologies for tears, but kisses for cleanup!
xoxo
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You’re getting good at this😉
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I’m so glad you think so, Peter! Thank you!
xoxo
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A beautiful description of the transition to the afterlife. I’ve got chills, morbidly beautiful. I’ve enjoyed this, well done D.K xx
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I’m so glad you liked it, PG! Thank you!
xoxo
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The last stanza, I got the chills. Nice. Xoxo
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I love giving you chills!
xoxo
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Sheesh! This gave me Bram’s Dracula vibes! Excellent!
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I’m a huge fan of that movie, though I haven’t read the book. That’s on my bucket list.
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Yes! A Beautiful film and book. “)
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oh Peter… you haven’t seen anything yet… this woman is a witch…
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Noooooo!!! Peter! Peter! (pumpkin eater)… I’m a GOOD witch, Peter! I’m the GOOD witch of the North or maybe it’s the South. Shit! Which fucking direction? Come back here! Come back!
Dammit, Sam! I was ‘THIS’ close, and you ruined it. I should never have taken that apple out of your mouth until I was ready to sit on your face.
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The whole piece is fantastic 👏 and the last stanza is remarkable poetry! Bravo!
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Wow, thank you, Daniel. I love your comments. Truly, I do. Thanks for following me!
xoxoxo
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Dark. My bed sheets will be over my head tonight after reading this. Nice!
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Oh, stop it, Keith. Pull your sheet down. I want to get a look at your neck and… wait, what is this? A tent pole?
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a tent pole is raised at night and in the morning. Come see what lurks beneath my sheets!!
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That thing operates just like clockwork
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Oh stop, Mr. Dragon! Your poetry is amazing… publication worthy. You have incredible depth and vision. I always love you insight on my stuff! Thank you!
xoxo
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Damn girl, you’re good with metaphor. Love that last stanza, it’s killer..
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Wow, thank you so much, Pandy! I’m honored. Thanks for reading!
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You’re welcome. It was an enjoyable read!
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Read MoreNebula Orgasm He’s here..I let him into my galaxyso far gone is the gravityas my soul begins to separate from my body..Feeling a rush of sedationas he slowly, so slowlydives into my orbit,showing admiration for my stars, in all their...
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The description and detail of a female orgasm is beautiful and dirty at the same time. This is one amazing write P.G. Explosive and cataclysmic!
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Vision, thank you ☺️ xx
~P.G💋
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Amazing and Brilliant metaphorical magnificence! BRAVO! Absolutely stunning piece! I am totally in awe. A seductive masterpiece! Wow! Wow! Wow!
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Dampkitten, you are too kind! Thank you so so much, I truly appreciate it. xoxo
~P.G💋
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I couldn’t read it without ET song playing in my head. Lol
Galactic pleasures are always the best!
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Lmao damn, I didn’t think of that. But apparently he doesn’t know the dangers of the black hole, he’ll find out soon enough. 😉 xx
~P.G💋
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Beautifully penned, P.G. Into the book it belongs! This is passionately written my friend. Love the flow between classic erotica & almost completely diving into the more dirty stuff. It’s well balanced, a great read. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I appreciate you, Damian. Thank you for your kind comment xx
~P.G💋
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Huge fan of metaphysical erotica.
Keep it goin’ PG!!Naaj
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Naaj, I thank you! I am also a fan of the metaphysical, especially the erotica. Much Love, xx
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HJ, it is an honor. Thank you xx
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I liked this. Now I’m seeing stars 🌟 haha
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That’s the goal, Daniel. Thank you! xx
~P.G💋
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I didn’t expect it to go that way! I am not into short stories but that was steamy and rejuvenating. Well done, DampKitten!