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    Everything Is Gonna Be Alright

    Carmyn Today is papa’s funeral, Nonna and Nonno have flown in from Staten Island and so have my aunts, uncles and cousins from all over New Jersey. It all feels wrong. It feels wrong to only see family when someone...

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    • Brilliantly penned, P.G. Incredible chapter my friend, you’re a natural storyteller. You sure this is your first time writing stories in this format? lol. Love the character development as well. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Damian, it’s my first time ever going this far. Lol. I’ve written a few that got put on the back burner and were never finished, never published, never shared. So I started anew and this particular story has my heart, it just comes to me so effortlessly. I’m so glad you are enjoying, it means so much. Thank you my friend. xx
        ~P.G💋

    • Your storytelling is phenomenal. A magical ride with great description for each character. Marvelous!!! xo

      • Keith, you rock! I appreciate you and your kind words as always my friend. Just wait, it gets better.

        xx

        ~P.G💋

    • You go Camryn. Do not take that tone. lol
      I am enjoying this story a lot and I know a lot of Italian-American people who have that Jersy accent. Love the imagery.

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    Hurt You So Good

    Lachlan“Let’s stop here, I’m starving Lach.” Lauren points at the quaint cafe on the corner. “Cuppa Joe’s” is the name. “Fine.” I answer shortly, already annoyed at myself that I promised her breakfast after her disappointing performance last night....

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    • Beautifully penned, P.G. The plot thickens, I like the shift in perspective, a different character a different point of view. Also reveals information to fill in the gaps between characters that only the reader is privy to, nicely done. Great flow on the information in the dialogue revealed by Mr. Knight. I think you’re a natural at this writing thing. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you Damian, that is exactly what I wanted to do here. Give a different pov and fill in those gaps. I appreciate you! xx
        ~P.G💋

    • Your romantic stories are a pleasure to read. Detailed, great build up of the characters and juicy bits and pieces, make your writes a joy. Great P.G xo

      • Thank you so much, Keith. That means everything when you are constantly floating in a sea of uncertainty. xx
        ~P.G💋

    • Line and sinker.. I’ll make sure to keep reeling you in, Adira 😉 xx
      ~P.G💋

    • Ooo she is in his sights. I love the devilish demeanor he has.

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    Only Fan

    Only Fan    Rounds of applause, sounds of clapping, fill the air. and no, i don’t mean hands. The way our bodies grind, you’d think this is a new dance. I throw it back to match your rhythm, the visual has you in a trance. Your fingers twisted in...

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    • Who wouldn’t be a fan of that? Great ink.

    • I appreciate you. xx
      ~P.G💋

    • Seductively penned, P.G. A quicken your pulse kinda flavor to this write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Damian I gotta keep that blood flowing to all the right places! 😉 Thank you my friend xx
        ~P.G💋

    • Reading your writes 1st thing in the morning sends me up, up & away. Blood pumping goodness! Who needs a bowl of sugary cereal, when I have the Poetic Gawdess to read. I hope you have a stimulating day..xxx

      • Keith, thank you! I guess that means I can consider mission accomplished. Like I told Damian, I’ve gotta keep that blood flowing to all the right places. Thank you my friend, I hope you do as well. xx
        ~P.G💋

    • Mmm, the way your words stroke the page it’s like you’re reaching into my fantasies and bringing them to life. I’m burning with fire for what comes next. Show me how deep this desire goes, I’m ready for every word.

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    Today

    I hear the words you place before me on the flat groundI hear the words you use as a wall to block and shut me outI understand not wanting to come too closeI understand the heat is too muchYet...

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