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DampKitten wrote a new post
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Well, M’Dear 🌺
Let me start with this: “GULP!”
Nowhere is there a “fiction” tag … thus, as wonderful as it is to imagine it’s all or partly fact (and, I’ve read every chapter through “Back In The Kitchen”), your unrivaled gift as a master raconteur has drawn me into every stunningly vivid detail of each breathfilled, thrumming moment, as though I’m alive in each character’s skin.
It’s truly staggering how erotically graphic and honest to reality the entire timbre is, all without a smidgen of disgusting ugliness … it’s entirely not in WHAT you write, but in HOW you write it, how you put, how you make it come across as though it’s all as humanly natural as one slipping into their shoes … as though it’s exactly what I’d do and how I’d act under the same circumstances.And, in addition, not a grammar, syntax, or diction gaffe in the lot … sighhh! Writers like You could put editors out of business, make editing arcane.
Oh, well … here I go again hogging all the air, wearing thin my welcome. Let me close with a very-very sincere, “Thank you, Lady-DK, for the sheer enjoyment of sharing your phenomenally rare prowess with a sparkling pen, Our Exemplarily Skilled Writer!” ⁓ Richard🖌
PS: in a lull, drop by my place to see what I’ve been up to of late … hint-hint! ; )
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I intend to ‘cum’ by, my sweet. I’ve missed reading your work. The weeks around here loom busy and distracting. Kids take priorities, and then, I have other interruptions which I plan to elaborate in my confessions. I expect to make you very disappointed in me… after which you will recall that I’m not actually your daughter, and it’s perfectly okay to stroke your bobbing dismay.
Please check my grammar, Richard. You are hereby my official editor and chief. You do know where my grammar is located, right? I have faith you will find it.
BTW… I think if you click on that last picture, you will find it’s a gif for you.
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Love those opening lines. The write felt like an emotional rollercoaster like most situations like those are. Great ink.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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I’ve had days just as you described but without the anger.
All that is certain is that your mood, like everything else, is impermanent.
While your feeling like crap its a good time for introspection.The way out is in.🙏 -
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hello beautiful Fia I feel you on this I can’t shake my mood either and I’m getting nothing done I have no motivation pain sucks it right out of you great write 💕
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Use that anger to reflect and learn what not to do, so the situation can be controlled and conquered.
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Very uplifting and witty my friend. Try new things, shake it up a bit, I follow. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Anxiety is a killer and its best freinds with alcoholism.
I like the positive thread that build throughout this piece.
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I fucking dipped my whole leg inside … and now I’m drowning…. Any other brilliant ideas on how I can survive this?!
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Brilliantly penned, DK. There is always so much depth underneath these saucy tales you weave my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian