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Read MoreI am lost in the flame, all burnt up. With a fire lit beneath my palm, And at the fingertips, I aim true to twist and turn my delight, Upside down, lost in her beckoning sight It’s her hot-lipped fire I see all around Yet...
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Thank you, Damian. 😊
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hello beautiful Fia and poet I’m not familiar with this is one of the best collabs. I’ve read in some time 💕
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Thank you, crimsin. We did this collab on DUP and he said to post it there and I enjoyed it. I posted it here. Not sure if he will find his way here. He may…
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Thank you, Raven xoxo
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Agree with Raven. That is one helluva solid landing at the end
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Thank you, Willow xoxo
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Some endings never end, others end before they’ve really begun, but always the questions remain. Well played 🌼
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Thank you, Average Joe xoxo
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Powerfully penned, Fia. You stuck the ending my friend, love the sleight of hand on the last line. Very clever, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian xoxo
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Read MoreWorld – Peels away, layer by layer Just so we can know, that – Which is there. Never-ever despair, even as you enter the diffusion - in the confrontation of the illusion of: The tether. Where it is deeper and darker and seems like...
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This is interesting. I like the “being in between.”
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Deep and introspective. Diggin this!!!
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Read Morehttps://www.youtube.com/shorts/1AXfOoo-1j4 Poets read the runes of raindrops Place of flow state space where time stops Each work of each, a renaissance Reaching for the out of reach: Essence-ever present in every birth & Rebirth. Born into this storm To be born and reborn Placing incision into perception So as...
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Thank you, Hj xoxo
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hello beautiful Fia this is so passionate and painful I only hope it is fiction love can be cruel 💕
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Thank you, crimsin. Yes it is fiction. I am glad you felt something from this. xoxo
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Simply amazing write my friend, you changed it up a little on this one. Excellent! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I always want to try something new. Always appreciate your comments.
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Awww, Fia =(
How poignantly vivid your pen has laid its sorrows’ disappointments upon our hearts … so many times we’ve gone through such relatably plaintive ache, yet, your poetic emotion expresses it all so vividly, as though it could be any one of us experiencing your own moments of disquiet.
“Love is a demon’s creation.
It obscures and twists the mind,
That being in complete submergence is good.”Oh, yes! Nothing’s like LOVE it when it’s good, when all is wine and roses; for, love shall seek not but for its own satisfaction. It will bend and twist you, and shine and dim upon you, while holding onto those within its grip. And, there is no single answer to the question of what love really is, but I have learned that when love is in control, there are no guarantees.
I so admire the smoothness and imagery with which you paint emotions, feeling, and thoughts upon the canvas our minds, hearts, and souls … the hallmarks of a true artist’s touch.
Swearing we’ll never fall in-love again, our needs are far too deep not to.
Beautiful work, Dear Poetess … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Richard🖌Superb artwork choice:
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“Excellent use of metaphor, too.”
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Passionately penned, Fia & Darrow. Incredible collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian