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Read MoreYou enter my pride, tearing me free of my egostripping me bareNude feelings trembleunder your stoic gaze lets peel it back slowlike there’s somethin worthy underneatheven tho we know there’s nothinbut skin scars and warnin signs Your eyes penetrate, burning my...
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously from us both woman for such a lovely comment 💕
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Powerful work.
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thank you graciously from us both dearest Thomas 💕
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hello lovely Raven thank you for the love on this write 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda & Ambjr. Incredible collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.
Damian
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Read Moreinteruppted covetousness exhaling deeply I sighmy thoughts careen within and I needhalted lust in stardust nightlonged to be touchedlanguishing in the deepness of beingbelieving it obscene I withdrawfeelings of lust present themselfentertaining the ideas I shytouching the edges of...
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Wow, this is smoldering. I enjoyed this crimsin, you do justice to the color you chose as your name.
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hello lovely Fia good evening you made me smile wide with your comment I deeply cherish it thank you lady 💕
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good afternoon thank you graciously 💕
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Read MoreNo one was harmed during the writing of this poem 1. Cupid had a dateWith a housewife, from midtownHe promised her love arrowsThe devilish cherub only brings her sorrow. 2. M. had an operationThe doctors treated him like a puzzleRe-arranged...
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Cleverly penned, M.E. This is a very witty write my friend, amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you brother! Highly appreciated! “)
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Very creative. Excellent work.
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Thank you, Thomas! “)
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This poem kicks so much ass! I love it! Offbeat, strange, smart, violent..you! I can see this becoming a film. Extraordinary creativity here.
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Thanks buddy! Highly appreciated! “)
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Hmm, no one was wounded, you say. Cupid was shot. lol this is good;)
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I did say that. Its just like movies, when they say that no animal was harmed during the making of this film and then someone shoot a dog or sth, and then some guy chase him and kill him with a f*ing pencil or something like that. To get an action franchise.
I am talking too much. Cupid is a piece of shit in here. And he got what he f*ing deserve.Lol. Thank you, Fia! “)
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You made my day with your sweet comment. I am glad you liked it. Thank you! “)
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This is the first and only piece of yours I have read so far. I must admit, I am intrigued. I stumbled upon you only because you were online (so few are at one time, I have found). But I like it very much; you made me smile with your shots at Cupid, and oh, yes, th little fucker has messed up so many lives, yes? However, I have ulterior motives as well. I am trolling for writers who use audio in their work. We now have a new category for what we do here: Spoken Word, and I am looking for those of us who do that. If so, or you just want to explore the possibilities, hit me back and let’s talk. I think you know HER; aske her about it.
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Thank you for reaching out and telling me about it. And thank for reading my silly scribbles.
Yep, he was. I think I have another poem coming with a Cupid as a victim. (Does it seem like I am vengeful toward it?! No? Lol)“)
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I was trying to get a Spoken Word group going here, but that fell through; however, I did manage to get a Spoken Word category for us when we publish pieces — or edit them — if you have audio embedded on the page. We now have a pretty good start at a Spoken Word library if you check it out. Jut choose CATEGORIES on the main banner, then Spoken Word on the dropdown.
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Moving verse with mystery woven in.
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Thank you! “)
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Read Moreno don't bother leave me alone to stew in bitternessregretful entaglement is to burnhated need builds and I'm at your mercyfitful desire screams to be fedin the dark glory, for your powerexcercise your will over me with caremy teeth...
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Oh! I like this, Brenda.
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hello dearest Adagio good morning thank you graciously 💕I’m happy you enjoyed…
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Tremendous work. Powerful writing.
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hello dearest Thomas good morning thank you graciously for the lovely comment 💕
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Unspeakable lust assaults you.
It’s a gamble your willing to takeThat is 🔥. Wow
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously for such a great response 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕
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hello beautiful poetess the lyrics I wrote the singing is not mine I deeply appreciate your thoughts thank you 💕
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Read Morescintillating rogue never boringsexy maverick manuevering on the aetherthe wind is coming from the east and I'm readythe dark covers me he looks right through mehe knows about mesanctity in sex it's a drugMr. charming is disarming watch out...
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Chère C.,
I’ve very little experience with the Misters Charming of this world.
But what with Roger McGough used to say: ‘talent is fine, but bring your empathy’, I can get to a place where I think I can perfectly see what you mean…A wonderful write!
Simply great.
Thank you!
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good morning dearest Gus thank you graciously for your thoughts I appreciate it 💕
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Damn this is good. Reminds me of Magic Man by Heart.
Great ink.
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hello dearest Nick I love that song… thank you I appreciate your lovely comment 💕
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Yes
Succumb
Confessional
Believe
BIG LIKE
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hello dearest Poet thank you graciously I’m so happy you liked this you are always an inspiration 💕
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With the kink of dark as I eat my Cheerios and sip my coffee. Fantastic! Brenda
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hello dearest Adagio you’re funny thank you graciously have a great day 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Very intense write. Both meshed well in this piece 💓