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hello dearest Gus what a lovely comment you are very sweet ❤️
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Great write but not as great as the picture of a beautiful woman.I don’t know if it’s you in the picture or not but there is something seriously attractive about her.
It’s beauty that goes deeper than skin,wisdom that goes deeper than words,scar tissue that colours the soul.
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hello dearest Benny no it is not me just an example of a beautiful older lady…lines and all my feelings got hurt that’s what this write was about I think people should take in all of you to see your beauty… not just the superficial…thank you for the love here ❤️
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A deep, heartfelt poem Brenda. Well said..xo
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hello dearest Keith thank you graciously dear friend ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Age has been a humbling experience for me. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Love the layers in this powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I was listening to a song called Lilith by Peter Grundy when I wrote this ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian for embracing me in this write ❤️
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreCutting against the grain is tough Battle tested dressed in scars It’s never easy when it gets rough Unable to reach the falling stars Opportunity often left to chance I’m so done with second guessing Forbidden love is a cosmic dance With issues that need addressing Is...
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hello dearest Damian I love the flow here and the content is so true I feel you on this ❤️
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Well said my friend. A powerful message I can relate to.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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i love this…the rhyming scheme…your words, impressively expresses the
compelling validity that stares us in our faces. an amazing write!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, C. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dear D,
For me this was on fire. I kept thinking of close calls trying to stay in my lane at the same time of feeling lured into another. With just enough sliver of light to keep the full on pitch black from engulfing my soul. Intense write. Great piece. H🌷
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, H. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Too many close calls, I know the feeling as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how this moves through doubt and self-interrogation without rushing to answers. The questions feel earned, not rhetorical.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thanks for your amazing commentary and continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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There’s a simultaneous sense of strength and uncertainty in this that drag at me. Like you know you made the right choice, but how close was it to the edge? That feeling I know all too well. If we’re not reviewing actions, we’re probably doomed to repeat them. Goes for individually as well as globally. Another layered one. Keep chasing thought, my friend. You always bring gold when you do
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I think your commentary is a pretty spot on analysis, and it definitely applies to both. I’m too old to learn a different trick when it comes to chasing the truth my friend. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love this! Skepticism is not paranoia, though gaslighters may disagree. Experience provides a roladex of patterned behaviors, and when there’s multiple red flags its no longer paranoia but an obvious truth.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Anna. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I concur with your powerful and precise commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreHey girl.You’re about 21,your life has just begun.And still,your smile doesn’t reach your eyes.Maybe, you’ve gotten wise;or maybe you realizedthat you don’t know where you’re going.you’ve got two kids that you’re toting;Life is hard.You’re in school and working two...
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You always find yourself when you don’t realize it.
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Yeah, I’d say that it was. Thank you for reading six. xx
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Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write with a very powerful message. Writing is therapy I agree with you completely. No matter how creative I get with a poem or lyrics there is always a therapeutic quality even as simple as getting something off my chest. Very relatable piece lets me know I’m not alone in the world. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I love that we can turn such pain into such beauty with the art of our choice.. there really is something poetic about it, ironically. Lol.
Thanks for reading my friend. xx
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PG
When the darkness surrounds you and you think of the unthinkable remember this.
You have to be alive to find peace.Death just brings death.
Now you take care and keep writing.🙏💋🙏
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Promise to keep on, keeping on! Thanks Peter. xx
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This is powerful and the images and words are delicately constructed. Always move forward PG, never look back. Well written.
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The pain I’ve endured has always been a stark reminder that I’m alive. I’m grateful for that.. always moving forward. Thank you, Vision. xx
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Great piece. There’s also a hidden but great message in here. Yes, kick your kids out of the nest. But let them know if pressure builds, if the world becomes to much, the door opens both ways and they’re always welcome. So many people commit the acts that they do, endure the abuse that they do because they have no where’s to return to
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Your muse has the answer of your being, so continue to let the words flow and live as you dream…but don’t any wooden nickels, are flying monkeys.
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Chère C.,
As in:
I see small lines in your face.
They are beautiful.
I had to wait an awful long time for them.
And now they are Here, I won’t let you go…
And I would cup your face in my hands.
Yes, something like this, for sure.
Warm regards, Gus