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Daniel Long wrote a new post
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Daniel Long wrote a new post
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Nice slide rhyme and repetition…
Solid imagery in [pioneer’s compass]…
I had a new idea for implementation
of imagery…Do something like a Carlos Williams
Red Barrel…Like just insert in…
In a unique and strange way…
Or do such a thing at multiple
sites in the poem…Perhaps with multiple separate
images…
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Betty and
twofiftythree are now friends
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Bat Powers wrote a new post
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Thank you for taking a read and thank you for asking
This is an actual person. He runs a haunted house/fun house out on the edge of our community. I asked him if I could write something that was inspired by him. Wrote from a place of fear and loathing with equal parts hope and magic! That thing that draws you in even if you shouldn’t.
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Sinister. The metaphors cut like a sharp ass knife. Nice work!