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    metallic

    feelings bare to the touch  causes my soul to achebleeding, hurt, stuffed with painLet it all bleed out erase the guilt  wash away the inky stainsIn your starstruck state Revelling in madness, you flyto crash to the groundhateful, cunning tricking out...

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  • Hunt or be hunted.

    Another day has come and gone without me being inside you, without you feeling the threat of  an animal waiting to devour you?   Here I am, still potent,still hungry, still stalking you,my prey. I could force myself on you. But I'm an animal not a sinner.   Why...

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    Anniversary

    Every year, it comes  unbeknownst  that quiet hour of passing  that date awaiting etching to  marble memory  and I  oblivious to finality  marching, marching, marching,  my matters to attend  I do not bend  to notice  nor pause consideration  to...

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    • It doesn’t look very happy, does it? LOL
      Thanks for reading, Peter!

    • I can make it happy for you….lol

    • As it may be a memorial for the passing of someone, it holds a momento mori!

      • It’s really contemplating the day of your death in advance… the anniversary to come that only others will remember. There’s a date and an hour that you live through every year which will one day be your very last moment.

        • I don’t know why your reply reminds me of a Nickelback’s clip video. Haha
          Yes, totally true!

    • That would be the day I follow suit… I don’t remember I have read this… you’re hiding things from me…mmmmm

    • Actually, I’m a fan of Emily Dickenson, and this is inspired by her work

    • Dear Poetess 🌿

      One would be hard-pressed to come upon a more impacting or meaningfully deep poem, rendered as thoughtfully, intelligently, and distinctly in Freestyle form, in homage to that enigmatic moment, individually awaiting us all.
      The entirety of this piece grabbed and held tightly; yet, the following lines of verse struck and admonished – just a bit deeper:

      “I do not bend
      to notice
      nor pause consideration
      to the end ” (heed we do well to prepare)

      Literally everything’s done masterfully to sheer perfection, Ma’am: Introduction photo and title, presentation, grammar, emotive power, sombre ambience, line-breaks, enjambment, vivid metaphor, and solemn imagery … everything, spot-on.

      Again, I bow in reverence, gratitude, and respect for showing us how it’s done! ⁓ Richard🌾

      -~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~•§•~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~-

      Soapbox: Here’s my 2¢ worth – dragged from dusty archives.

      -~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~•§•~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~-

      ON LIFE † ON DEATH

      From the unknown we come to the unknown we return.
      we’re but brilliant flashes in the infinitely ethereal⁓*

      -~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~•§•~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~-

      THE SUN….
      setting at one point rises at another;
      every moment of its motion is a setting and a rising.

      For, as the sun rises in its setting and sets in its rising
      … so is Life~so is Death …

      We die when we are born and are born when we die.

      Death~Sunrise … Sunset~Birth

      ALL THESE….
      are but the thoughts~dreams~fears of the
      … Blind and Sleeping …

      For, all Life is a death beginning and all Death is
      Life continuing, neither separate from the other.

      -~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~•§•~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~-

      In contemplation to the “impossibility” of coming from nowhere and going to nowhere, with no source and no destination.
      This realization can bring great comfort from the loss of those who have left us, “that” there has
      to be an eternal somewhere for Them … for Us.

      Richard W. Jenkins
      ©2007

      • As always, I just want to slobber all over you, Richard. Can you seriously make me throb any harder? My God. The last time anyone complimented my poems this emphatically, I screwed him in his classroom after my exam… no condom and no lock on the door. Yes, we were interrupted. Ask me if I gave a shit.

        So, professor… how long before your next class?

        xoxo

  • 24 hours ago

    24 hours ago our bed held only the ghost of my shape & you breathed like nothing was missing   i wanted to shout from the spare room (i’m not there i’m not there) but sleep had stitched your eyes shut with trust   the saddest thing was not that i left but that you didn’t feel the cold   where i wasn’t   or if you...

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    Bubba

    There's an old graycat that wanders theneighborhood.Neutered and wildgreen eyes.He's confident, andthick,doesn't trust humansbut loves tuna.I don't blame him.I have three femalecats that watch him throughthe window, wagging theirslim tails.He couldn't care less.I call him Bubba.His head is the...

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    • Thanks. Much appreciated.

    • Cleverly penned, Thomas. I remember a stray cat when I was a teenager, many summers ago. Saw him catch a bird right out of the air. He would only let us pet him on the back porch, once off the porch he wouldn’t let you near him. We also fed him tuna, he was a great hunter as well. I had a stray female later on in life that helped me kill a snake. She was friendlier than the male. She would bring us gifts, dead mouse, dead bird, dead mole, she wanted to take care of her family, which was us in her eyes. I also owned three indoor cats, they’re truly fascinating animals. Sorry for the rant, my friend. My cats passed a few years back, so any story about cats hits my heartstrings. This was an incredible write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Very cool. I have 3 female indoor cats. Shadow, Nukowski and Mojo. Love them. Thank you, my friend.

    • Very good ink. Enjoyed this and that last line well that has heavy meaning

      Bat

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