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Read MoreIt surely would then seem...there's still so much left to redeemfrom a life lived on a razor edge,tearing apart every single pledge. Every promise I dared to make,each one cracked like porcelain fake,and every lie I’ve yet to tell,draining ink...
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Powerfully penned, LDF. A great spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I really felt this deareast poet and perfect meter and word choices they conveyed your feelings perfectly 💕
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I forgot from DUP how eloquently you write!
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Fia Naturie and
Willow are now friends
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Read MoreI wrote a poem then I picked up a guitar sang a couple lines holy shit that's a hit! Jimmy Iovine is now looking at me like I'm a chick with big tits because there's money to be made just not for the artist getting clicks on Spotify making...
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I love the pick. Sleezy monopoly. The poem went perfect with it
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Thanks you. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
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Phenomenal write, Nick. A great read my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for the compliment and read. It is very much appreciated.
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Haha!! You get it
Capitalism is a double-edged sword. Can’t avoid it
Always swing with leveragePoetic dopeness and a timely write
Much respect
Naaj
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Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post
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Read MoreNo spooning no forking No cutlery in bed No sweet cunnilingus No more giving head No doggies no cowboys No lube,no more toys No sounds like " I'm cumming" Life's greatest of joys. No moisture no heat No pounding of bits No pinching or biting No cock between tits No biting...
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That is so sad. Nothing at all.
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Noooooooooo
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I suspect that there are also many women, of a certain age,whose husbands aren’t interested in sex any more….but I ain’t one of them.
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Other peoples wives….lol
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You can say anything to me….
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And you my dear are a miracle.💋
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Love the Dr. Suess format. Fun piece, despite the sadness.
My mom once shared with me that she and my dad never lost their passion for each other and were still, er. active until shortly before he died at 84. I wish all couples could be that lucky.
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Love your rhyme!!!
But JFC I pray to never be this woman!! No nothing? At all? Ever? It’s quite miserable. :’( Great poem. xx
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Praying won’t stop the process of ageing and delusting.If that’s you in the picture then you have time on your hands sand plenty of praying time ahead of you.
May the force be with you.💋
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Peter, congrats on your hardware for this piece! It’s truly excellent and you are definitely deserving! The rhyme is brilliant. The meter is spectacular. The subject matter is disturbing, but that’s what poetry is about. Despite the depressing circumstances, you still manage a subtle tongue in cheek sort of literary smirk… capped off by this reference to silverware.
Brilliant
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Thanks DK for the lengthy comment….aren’t words magnificent.If only some of our leaders could use theirs more wisely.
😘
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Ah, Peter (and I choose that address on purpose, of course), folie a deux of the wurst kind (sorry, couldn’t resist), but terrible enough to be a winner, eh, P? A nice write. had me chuckling for sure. A nice job here.
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My day has started well by bringing a chuckle to yourself.
Whimsy and humour often make good poems….right?-
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and we need more of both 🙂
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