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Read MoreI recall many nights with you,Under the skies of mid-December It seemed almost nightly, you were wearing that nightie We called it “ugly pink”, remember? My eyes would secretly glideUp and down that satiny gownHungrily drinking, the shiny fabric clinging To every curve...
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Thanks for visiting, Peter. I’m pleased you found some delight in the piece.
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This is a bit dreamy. I like how you reminisce.
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Thanks for reading and dreaming with me, Fia!
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A truly mesmerizing encounter you paint so exquisitely. I really love the composition here and your imagery is sensual magic. Erotica at its finest.
John
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Read MoreIn blackened dreamsa mist descends from the hills Unsuspecting Only the dust moves,like a funeral veil of melancholy Sorrow The traveler of unknown plainsthrough darkness & light Confusion Flowers of desirable bloomLethal in touch and smell Death
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This feels haunting and ethereal. The imagery of mist, dust, and fatal blossoms captures that eerie beauty of twilight so well. A powerful blend of melancholy and mystery.
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Hi Romaj. Thanks for the feedback. Appreciated!
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Very scary walk. I love the description.
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Perfect for the time of year. Thanks Fia.
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I love this twilight mood in the forest which you describe perfectly here. A little dangerous, magical and most mystical! A mind blowing imagery in this awesome poem, my friend!
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Thanks my dear friend…Always!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Into the book it belongs! Dig this, brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. You rock!
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Over deliciously penned, my friend.
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Your comments are very gracious. Appreciate it
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Damn was not going to survive anyway. It was his time. I feel sorry for him
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Don’t feel sorry for him. I heard he was a troublemaker. Thanks Fia.
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Shit happens.. Again one of your wonderfully sarcastic poems, dear Keith!
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Yes it does. Thanks Elke.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. It’s that time of year, when you tell halloween stories. With a name like, Rusty Trombone, he was dealt a bad hand from the start. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It is October. Let’s get crazy. Thanks Damian.
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Your halloweenish spooky words are the best for the month…
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Your comments fulfill my devilish ideas. Thanks PAR.
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Read MoreA teenage girl somewhere anywhere was busy text messaging friends on her cell phone a month ago.She was walking along a set of railroad tracks.Although deaf since birth, she had frequently proclaimed that she could avoid danger more easily...
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That’s some heavy fucking irony, Keith. The title reminded of an old song, though it had to do with trains it wasn’t this twisted. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hi Damian. I’m familiar with that old track. The Yardbirds & Aerosmith covered it. Thanks for the feedback friend.
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Gotta be on your toes. Getting too comfortable can get you hurt.
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Absolutely. People today are so oblivious of their surroundings. That was one of the reasons why I wrote this piece. Thanks Adelphina.
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Scrumptious minced blind meat…
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Come one, come all for this delectable treat. Thanks PAR.
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Delightful piece and a lovely memory for you.