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hello dearest Keith thank you my friend ❤️
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hello beautiful one thank you graciously for the love her it’s felt ❤️
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Who’s to say when our godhead or universe should speak to each of us. There may be an unknown equation that determines when the voices appear. Is it possible that others are impersonating our universe and we’re reacting to feedback. Just a question Lady, tight
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God as I understand him created the demons…they are a part of our universe…God himself is very dark look at the world and even nature it’s not hard to tell when he is pissed off just people pretend they don’t…he has instruments of darkness to experience the other aspects of his personality as well as being kind humble and a genius… when I complain about innocence he tells me you don’t know that being or what they need… so there it is the way I understand things ❤️
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you too sweet lady good morning ❤️
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Read Morewith culted bane I speak profaneobscure morose, masturbating my insanitydilligently scribing my death daystime spent in the company of demonstalking to the world through a fogno one to tell, no one believes meon specters and ghostsfaulty little imperfection I...
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I would not be afraid to know the worst of you. Some well put together. 🖤💜
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thank you dearest Jim no one but God ever see the worst of me…I keep a reign over myself the best I can… I am dark ❤️I appreciate your thoughts…
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excellent write
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thank you graciously dearest poet I see you changed your pen name ❤️
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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Read MoreMidsummer season on my wintry lips, these modern symptoms from antiquated sorrows. The sunlight of acceptance, and midnight of isolation. Youthful blushes and the wrinkles of experience, I have the free will to question my fate. This wealth of imagination, and the poverty of my reality. The...
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Your imagination is a beautiful flowering garden, you are a wealthy man, dear Daniel! Your wording is awesome. You are a master in using the stylistic device of contrasts!
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Daniel this is sublime in its dark vision. You have so much to say in your poem here and I for one am really liking what you wrote. Though dark it has a flow that is mesmerizing.
John
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Read MoreThere is a crack in my mind and everything flows into it. My head floods with such intensity, I drown in my own little world. I look through my eyes, nothing is what it seems. Blinded I am from the truth. Lost... oh, so lost! Where...
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Powerful, insightful and honest.
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This just flows and sings the song of darkness in an engaging way. I could feel your words deep in my marrow.
John
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Marvelous write Brenda. You always capture the emotions and feelings so perfectly.