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Read More1He who walks with his mind in his head.Though he don't know it.He's already dead.2Everybody's talks these days.But nobody listens.Not even to themselves.3Somedays I wish the earth were flat,so I could walk right over the edge.Instead it's a sphere,a...
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend, your thoughts here make me ponder. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian…..some thoughts need to be shared with folks who might understand…..it’s hard to find anyone who wants to consider things that aren’t seen on social media.
Fortunately lots of people on here,yourself included, appreciate my musings.
I’m a minor key sorta guy.
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Read MoreIn the sea of blue-green glass The cracks and slivers are camouflaged Beauty entices and invites you to touch Unaware minute cuts into unsuspecting skin When eyes focus You see the warped and corrupted shards Lessons learned and ingrained into the subconscious As blood drips and...
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I see this as someone discovering the blue green glass for the first time. Interesting poem, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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I see it as a discovering of the truth about someone close.
It’s a great write however I interpret it.🙏-
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Thank you, Peter;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I love your musings. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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good morning lovely Fia this went from beautiful to dark carried out by the frothing sea so poignant ❤️
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Thank you, crimsin 🩷
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Beauty brought fore by abrasion.
An important truth of nature I believe.-
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Yes it is. Thank you, Jim;))
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Chère F.,
Pollution in its mildest form.
An environmental poem in disguise.
See? That’s the fun of it. To write something small and everyone had his/her own ideas about it.
Pure genius, no matter how you look at it.Keep ‘em coming please…..
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Thank you, Gus (I will try to keep going:) )
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Excellent analogy…beauty often disguises danger for the unwary
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Thank you, Willow;))
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Very mysterious and philosophical.
Regards JamesI love the way glass goes from sharp and dangerous to soft and smooth with the passing tides
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Thank you, James;))
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Read MoreThe marsh mango held secrets colder than breath. Here, air hung lowthick with the host of things. With the sweet scent of moral decay clinging to the shadows on death's runwayThe bayou as dark as bruised plums sucking, the...
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Read MoreStradivarius of the cosmosWith a long slow vibratoHaunting the ancient lights Untamed as melodious shadowsHeard not in the ears...On a poetic Odyssey
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so gorgeous dearest Adagio have a beautiful day ❤️
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Thank you Brenda.
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Read MoreBefore the memory thaws the northern light So white the scent of frozen silence Caught in the clarity of ancient bite Before the memory thaws
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hello dearest Adagio good afternoon this is great I often wonder where the memory goes and then returns ❤️ a thawing perhaps…
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That’s a good question. Thank you, Brenda.
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The introduction to a poem, and it’s closing line…when they are one in the same, it makes for quite an impact to the reader, at least to me. It looks quite simple, but in reality, there’s a lot of finesse at play. Your image is striking, as well. Great presentation with its brevity. Much enjoyed, Adagio!
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Thank you, Kelly.
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Those are some interesting thoughts. Round and round we go. you are right.