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Read MoreI'm living on an excuseThe night destroys meSo much of nothing racing through my mindI lie to continue each dayNo one knows what I mean but meIf you were to hold my hand,There would be no emotion, no warmthThere's...
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I’m not sure if I would enter anyone’s prison. I don’t want to enter my own! Thanks Fia for the awesome comment.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend. Some questions have complicated answers. Appreciate you.
Damian
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They sure do. Thanks Damian.
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Simple pleasures, and small feats. Great write Peter. xx
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Beautifully penned, Peter. It’s the little things. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian and PG….it’s a long day without a cup of tea, so get in early.No.matter what my mood a piping hot cuppa moves it for a while.
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Hoi hoi Peter,
That’s a qualitea poem. Hats off.
Love it a lot. Leave it up to me to murder your language.If you are American: Thank you!
In all other cases: keep ‘em coming, please.Kind regards, Gus
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Thanks Gus and no I’m not American… Australian.
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Tragic, painful, sadness. This poem has so much hurt but brilliantly written Brenda. Great!
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good evening dearest Keith thank you graciously ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. This one tugs at the heartstrings my friend. I can feel the hurt in your words. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian good evening thank you graciously for feeling me on this ❤️
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With lost things can never be the same, but you can still move forward. Sad piece Lady
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hello dearest Me I always appreciate when you visit me thank you ❤️
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Read MorePoetry wasn’t a choice.It showed up at my doorlike a small, rabid animalI needed to nurture. Like a scar,like my eye color. Before book sales,before applause,before anyone gave a damn. I was jaded by color.Sunsets weren’t cute.They were edible —pink and orange,soul...
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The last stanza is brilliant. Love it and the poem. Great work!
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Thank you.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Preach my brother, preach! You nailed this out of the park. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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Awesome.
Indeed, it’s that little angel/demon upon our shoulder, compelling us to write something, anything, to relieve the pressure of wanting to say something to the void. Life?Love?Pain?Loss? All of it.
Your write is terrific. I think we all write “for ourselves”. yet to have someone acknowledge our words does mean a lot. It makes us feel like it does matter, after all.-
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Thank you. I agree…it is nice when someone acknowleges us.
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Excellent ink & Not a single drop wasted .. Neville 😎👍
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Thank you, my friend.
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Yep. That’s just the way it is. We create because that’s how we deal with the world.
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so true.
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That last stanza…is everything. It’s never about accolades. It’s because we must. Damn…
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So true.
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work. You paint this scene well.
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Dark poem and interesting end question. Would you enter if I were to lock you in my prison? We all have our own prisons at some point in time. to enter someone else’s is …would be difficult. Good piece.