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    "AWAKEN!"

                             "A w a k e n !"         Surround our hearts with endless song,            across this world of lies.         Let's listen close to what went...

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    • And it doesn’t help that all our leaders seem to be making every move to have more and more and more power.

      The people’s voices these current days are just “blowin’ in the wind.”

      Love the sentiment and the feel of this piece.
      j.

    • Thank you Jacob,
      Yes, I totally agree!!
      Thank you for your review.
      Appreciate it,
      Lisa

    • Powerfully penned, Lisa. Excellent write my friend, there are so many casualties in war. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thank you so much Damian for taking the time to review my writing.
      All my best,
      Lisasview, now in Spain

    • Lisa,
      I have long thought that war is the main identifier of humankind. The only question is, where is the mine where we can dig for our “humanity?” Where does “human kindness” come from? I mean is it “shame for who we really are” so, we try to justify ourselves? It seems that no matter how good our intentions, the end is always a disaster, and nothing we build can last. So here we are dancing in the desert, just trying to carry on…
      Vol

    • Yes, great line “Dancing in the Desert” and oh so true.
      Thank you for reading my poem Vol
      Lisasview, now in Spain

    • As far as I’m concerned – if war is such a successful event – why has there been more than one??? Who set all others going and managed to have weapons ready and waiting? Why have some countries managed to remain neutral and not be drowned in white feathers? Why hasn’t time produced enought wisdom to choose leaders who can discuss what needs discussing sanely, intelligently, unselfishly, with quiet wisdom and HONESTY?

      Your words are sane and helpful, honest and sans greed – seems wars are begun by anything and anyone with entirely the opposite attitude. How and why? Does jingoism have a big part in it or what?

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    HAND~IN~HAND

    Hand-In-Hand.... Her tired eyes saw more than I'll ever know; long silv'ry hair piled high upon her head, the clean fresh scent of times so long ago ... warm stinging tears are those I often shed. Remembering her laughter through our years, when we walked...

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    • Beautifully said, Lisa. The bond between mother and daughter never fades if they’re both in good standing with each other. Welcome to the site. (Relic).

      • Hi Tim,
        Are you the same Relic that was on Writers Cage?
        Thank you for your review,
        Lisasview, now in Spain

        • That’s me. Good to have you here. 🙂

          • Yes, and glad to be her… I think I lost many poems on Writerscafe… working hard to retrieve them…
            Lisa

      • Thank you Tim,
        Yes the bond can be strong… but it also can be broken…
        Lisa

    • I agree, this is a beautiful sonnet.

      • Thank you so much Fia…
        I just posted Awaken but I can not get my image cenetered.
        And I also can not get rid of the space between the lines… Is that just the way it has to be on your site?
        Lisa

        • You’re welcome I took the liberty to center your picture and aluminate the spacing. You can of course edit it to how you want.
          To center your picture >highlight it >click on the center align bar. It is 4 horizontal lines.
          To eliminate the spacing> you click on the backspace >then click the shift enter at the same time.
          I was told it happens with some computers but not all. I have the same situation.

          • Hi Fia,
            I spent forever trying to move the image and take out the extra spacing….
            Thank you so much for doing this for me.
            Would you mind terrible fixing Hand~In~Hand?
            I will post another one and try what you suggest.
            Lisa,still in Spain

      • So glad you liked it… One of my most favourites.
        Lisasview, now in Spain.

    • Thank you so much Peter…
      New to this site and finding it a big challenge to post exactly the way it is on my computer.
      The image on my Awaken poem is to the left… but it should be centered.
      Lisasview, now in Spain

    • A beautiful beginning, and I expect it shall continue so. Well done 🌼

      • Thank you so much for your review Average Joe,
        Lisasview, now in Spain

    • This poem hits deep. Reminds me of my mother. Hard childhood, lots of pain…was always in her cupboard…she is free of that now.
      thank you for this write, Lisa.
      j.

    • Thank you so much for your thoughtful review Jacob,
      Lisa

    • This is touching. I didn’t have the best relationship with my mother when she died, although it was improving. For that reason, I enjoy seeing how things should have been, and your lovely words do just that.

    • Thank you so much Sam for taking the time to review my very first dinner.
      Lisasview

      • Just looked back at my reply to you Sam… I was on my phone when I replied and now see that Sonnet turned into dinner… so weird…
        Lisa

    • Beautifully penned, Lisa. Amazing write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thank you again for reading my poem and reviewing it.
      Lisasview, now in Spain

    • Thank you so much SeaCat for taking the time to read my Sonnet and reviewing it.
      Much appreciated,
      Lisasview, now in Spain

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