Sensual and dark in it’s own right.. good poem!!

This is simply awesome, my friend! Dark, mysterious, spiced up with creative, empressíve pictures and comparisons.

So much dark intrigue woven into so few words that quickly gripped me by the throat.

Thank you, Harriet.

Nice write Fia.

I’m not sure if time even exists in the universe…..seems like a human construct.

Unfortunately some live in snow globes. Frozen in the same memories and misfortunes.
A well written, thought provoking poem, with a good concept. Well done, Fia! “)

Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

Chère F.,
How have you done this, with almost each line/sentence a different perspective.
You always seem to surprise me and it looks like maybe it’s surprising you that you do.
What a lovely way to start a new week!
Love it to bits!
Warm greetings, Gus

To me, time as a gift. None of us knows, how long their lives will last. I think, it is most important to use the gift of time we receive to find out who we are, why we are here and how to live a life in harmony and at peace with ourselves and all of creation.
A well written and meaningful poem, dear Fia!

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