Beautifully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

“The rigor mortis of planes on runways.”
Quite creative imagery there and throughout.
The first stanza could even stand as a poem by itself.
“Ventriloquist placed your words in my mouth”

I have none of my own any more as I am so taken by you.

Love the concepts developed here.

Excellent work.
j.

you’re too kind. thank you.

There can be so many things that terrorize us. The worst is regrets of the past that stay with us. That haunt us in our sleep or just won’t let us sleep.
Getting rid of those demons can be a long, agonizing and scary process.
Really sharp personification here.
j.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian