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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

Mojito Dreams

Poetry

September 26, 2025

8

You take me to a dream of nonsensical promisesOf rainbows and diamonds falling from the skyA kiss placed strategically on the browScreams of hidden thoughts and wants Why should we not indulge in a dreamAllow liberties and fanciful playOnce awakened...

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8 Comments
- Tim
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  This is whimsical with beautiful wording throughout, Fia. Really nice work. 🙂
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Tim;)) <3
    - RomaJ
      10 months, 2 weeks ago
      
      I felt instantly swept into a pure, sensuous dream. Every line is brimming with color, desire, and such a playful, intoxicating energy. It’s more than a cocktail; it’s a feast for the senses.
      
      Fia Naturie
      10 months, 2 weeks ago
      
      Thank you, Romaj…It’s a feast for the senses…appreciate that;))
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! I love the playful nature of this write my friend. Excellent! Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you, Damian;))
- Visions_of_Insanity
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Nice work Fia. You’re a wonderful poet!
  - Fia Naturie
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thank you so much, Vision
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• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

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Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

The Final Resolution

Poetry

September 26, 2025

4

I was discouraged at therapy that my face was hideousNo one knew a sinner unless they looked at their fatherThe mother of your sons biological abortionLike a pistonLike a slug waiting to eat saltDisintegration of the molten force underneath...

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4 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Keith. This is classic you my friend. The Dr. Seuss of horror. I’ve missed you brother. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Miss you too Damian. Appreciate the feedback!
- RomaJ
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  This poem is raw and fearless. The line about the father hit especially hard – it carries so much weight and truth. The imagery throughout is visceral and powerful, like a scream turned into poetry.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks for the awesome feedback!
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

The Obliging Neighbor

Short Stories

September 26, 2025

6

This morning I just looked out my windowAccross the streetI saw my neigbor place a gun to his dog's headHe blew the dog's brains out all over the placeHe walked calmly back into the houseA few moments laterHe dragged...

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6 Comments
- Fia Naturie
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Now it makes me think who needed to be trained the child and dog or the parents not watching them at all????
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Getting rid of annoyances around my neighborhood would make me quite happy. Thanks Fia
- Damian DeadLove
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Keith. What kinda neighborhood you living in? lol. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    I live in Mr.Robinson’s neighborhood. That’s a deep cut from early SNL. Thanks Damian.
- Paula Jobi
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I love the unexpected! This was fantastic!
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks Paula! You rock!
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• 10 months, 2 weeks ago

The Heart is Just Twilight

Poetry

September 26, 2025

5

Place my orphan heart inside the jewels of your oceanic dress every tide could just be bikini may the last Wednesday wave keep you wet forever Where were youwhen my spine was a crushed novellaawaiting the librarian delicate touchto place me on her bookshelf? How...

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5 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Strangely brilliant.
  - Ghosteen
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    I’ll settle for strangely beautiful. Thank you Peter. In poetry and cyber kindness. Rob
- RomaJ
  10 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  The tension between digital distance and primal yearning – between the “computer screen” and “bones falling out of pillows”
  – is utterly captivating. The imagery is beautiful and sensual, a collision of technology and raw desire.
  - Ghosteen
    10 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Where the hell did you sail from? Let’s board a pirate ship and plunder & plunder, until there is nothing left but words hand-scratched on the Titanic.
    
    Written since the womb really (apologies – that sounds so fucking pretentious) but as the decades tumble, if I can touch such beautiful souls then let that be my linguistic epitaph. Rob – never ever call me Bob. Lol
- Styxian
  10 months, 1 week ago
  
  Outstanding.
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