Hi
I just posted my thoughts a note to my son. Whom to fuck. Great lines you have written in raw.

I see you are budding poet. Because I see your thoughts connect with a lesson and reality.

Jessy Jacob

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A good write

An awesome write by an awesome writer, if I do say so myself! I’m happy that you decided to post something in here! You’re needed! And this isn’t really a dark write, my dear. I get more of a vibe of searching for a solution to a frustrating moment, yeah? Anyway, I love the message you carried consistently throughout the poem. It moves along fluidly and keeps the reader spellbound to the end. Well done, my love!
Hey, get some sleep!

Beautifully penned, Adel. Another excellent write with lots of layers my friend. I concur with Mark, I don’t think it’s a dark write, it does have a mysterious vibe though. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

A great poem Adelly. I get a crystal ball vibe out of this, or a maybe even a gypsy feel. Either way, I like it. 🙂

Hi Gus!

It’s so wonderful to hear from you. Yes I did! Willow is a rock star so her ode gave me an extra skip in my step. Haha
I am so honored to have an Amsterdam fan base which would not be possible without you and your talent! No joke. You rock on that guitar amigo!
As for the write I had not been on for a while and decided to post something. I’ve been busy finishing the first draft of my book! So excited for the future:). Life is a true blessing.
Thanks for stopping by and for the read.
Give Amsterdam a huge hello and thank you from me!

There’s definitely nothing dark about this one, girl. This one rolls out almost spiritually. Whether pagan calling to their priestess or spirit calling to her inner priestess…this hits beautifully. We have entered “spooky girl” season and it’s time to bring out the fun stuff indeed! I’m not much good at spooky, but maybe I can try my hand in honor of the month. 🙌

Hi

I see now scared of chicken to eat.. what made you to draw that horror pic. Anyways I stopped eating chicken. Seeing the cruelty to human i thought I crime will reduce with me stop eating meat.

I see why we are undecided did you decide everything for me no how do I enforce you your heart your way to get what you want where did you give me choice I decided i know you are there fir me but was unaware the way. Remember you have given word and i know love shall show the way. Why do you want my decision you have your own decision. Come with flying colors not with depressed eyes…

Jessy Jacob

I love that you chose a positive message to write of. There is never enough of that. So thank you! And the write is well crafted, full of inspiring lines to lift the reader up. Great idea and great result, Fia.

Great thoughtful writing Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with lots of deep layers my friend. Nicely done. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

This does have a positive feel to it.
You never know, sometimes acknowledging someone who’s struggling could impact their day in a positive way.
One could only hope!

Excellent poem, Fia. This has a positive vibe going on.

I think that too often people know it’s a mask, but they want to believe it’s reality. Because having to see what makes them uncomfortable is more than they’re willing to take on. So we paste on the smile and say we’re fine, and they eagerly choose to believe it so they don’t have to acknowledge the truth. I love that the message in this is to see beyond the surface

This is a different you, but i like it, just as much.

Phew! Glad to hear it! xx

I have so many thoughts on this one. I wish I didn’t feel this was our potential “future”…for however long it lasts. It gets uglier by the day. Not ready to give up yet though. Amazing writing! I was talking to Mary the other day and she said she just bought your latest book. 🙌