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Read Morein my waiting time I think of youpure beauty and longingwistful understanding to desireyour western drawl remindeds me of summermy passion stirred and I feel the pangs againto go down south and meet you barefoot in the grassmy soul...
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Makes me want to hop on the saddle. 😉
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giggles thank you dearest Jim ❤️
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👅
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with amazing imagery and wordplay my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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hello lovely poetess thank you graciously for such a sexy comment ❤️
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NO – A nice one. 😉
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Im glad i came upon this. Wonderful ink Crimsin
Bat
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thank you gracioulsy dearest Bat me too ❤️
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Read MoreWhile searching for tomorrow, I found yesterdayWhen you broke my heart and left me feeling this wayIf the universe was formed of chaos how did we go wrongI pulled you in so close you were the only one that...
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hello dearest me I am sad for your heart but this is beautiful in its honesty and written ❤️
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We love that you like this piece there is more to life than happy falling in love poetry, Thanks Lady
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Read MoreThe problems that you mentioned baby, we could've worked throughTackled one by one, against me and youI realize that the weight seems all on your shouldersBut I'll carry you and your problems, just let me hold you I can see...
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I wonder sometimes if we’re too afraid to take a chance…because it might succeed and then where would we be? I’ve certainly been that person. The unknown can be terrifying. But so worth the risk
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We wonder sometimes about that caveman to step outside of the cave, or that first monkey to climb down from is tree. Life, like love is taking a chance everyday that you awake. Thanks Lady
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with layers of depth my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Since I have not been posting because of work I am trying to give a little more. Thanks cuz
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Chère F.,
How can someone be powerful and sweet at the same time?
Lovely, what a lot of ‘tastes’ in one poem!Warm regards, Gus
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Thank you, Gus, for the compliment.
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and You my friend “stole” our interest and attention once again with your passionate and exquisite writing. I respect how each couplet both shows and tells us a story. Fantastic poem!
An espresso con panna to you.
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Thank you so much for that. Espresso con panna thank you Clay;))
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🙂
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Enough said with a smile. Thank you, Jim;))
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Oooh, very clever!
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Thank you, Willow :))
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Really like that ending, tight
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Thank you ME:))
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Damian DeadLove and
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