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Read MoreAnother spirt in a quagmire Selling off dignity just to get by Inflated egos that conspire Adding layers to a perpetual lie Sycophants always fall in line Empty vessels lacking a spine This world so full of sorrow Throwing obstacles in the way All I’m asking of...
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. A lot of us do wish for better days, that’s for sure. It has a musical feel is on point, it pretty much demanded to be that way, I just followed along for the ride. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I agree.
Thank you for putting it into words so eloquently.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, P. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Got my foot tapping away from the off to the end and back again .. Nice one too sir . Neville
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does have a bit of a rhythm. Thank you for your continued support kind sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like how this feels angry and tenderly thought at the same time. I like that hopefulness in the dark
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brandon. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian the fire in the eyes of those zealous followers of the pied piper elevated to guru status is painted in your poem with fire and smoke. Truly a smoking great poem that is as strong emotionally as it is rhythmically. You have real talent my friend.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Really loved the way you described the write in your eyes my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I don’t think I’ve seen subterfuge used in poetry before and you made it fit and feel perfect.
I think many of us are feeling the same way, especially with the way the world is going.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Wally. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I like using odd words or hardly used words from time to time. When I can make them fit of course. lol. The world is very fragile at the moment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Al Ashcott and
Sappho (Elke) are now friends
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Incredible! It’s like she doesn’t want to desecrate her sacred holiness even though it begs her to give in to human desires and lust so she transforms back into smoke. Really incredible poem and picture, Crimsin.
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hello dearest Tim lust can be all consuming…the soul moveable but untouchable like smoke… I love you review thank you graciously ❤️
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Nice! Enticing and not tacky at all. This is pure poetry, Crims. You did a great job with it. And what a pleasure to read it.
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hello dearest Styxian thank you graciously I’m happy you liked it ❤️
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Passionately penned, Brenda. An amazing write my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you my friend ❤️
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It is a bit musical. I wish for a better day, each and every day. That deer lost in headlights is so true