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Read MoreIt's been locked away for so longYou're asking me to allow you the keyTo push open the door that's so strongLetting you see what can never beDo you hear the thud, thud, thudDo you know what it could beDo...
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Thank you, Damian;))
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Read MoreScented cardamom lingering of the ghost hosting promises of unspoken surrenderchilling the lime drawn to intoxication squeezing my Tequila unravelling threads with an empty glass, two fingers neatleaving behind sacraments on the tongue of sodomy lingering of the ghost
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Crisp… raw… echoing…
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Thank you, kindly.
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Read MoreLike air bubbles from the wombof grudges and unhealed woundsas memories run deep and bitter pill to swallowwith a taste that lingers of red-eye gravy
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Read Moresolid white plains meet the horizon crystalized fine like powder ice figures sculpted by free hand on every tree wind swaying arctic breath flowing silently snowflakes dance innocent eyes childhood ideas good memories nestled inside from the window looking outward deep in thought weaving beauty when a voice so familiar warms my soul with splendor my son says.. Dad, it’s snowing!! Copyright @ Damian DeadLove...
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Awww that is so sweet. Nice memory.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I don’t always give a lot of tender moments in my writes. lol. Tell you the truth, they’re the biggest reason I quit drinking. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I don’t show my tender side often, this one was letting my guard down, big time. It was a special memory, in fact they’re the biggest reason I quit drinking. That and I didn’t want to damage them mentally by not understanding why daddy drinks so much. I didn’t want to scar them. I brought tears to my own eyes now. Best choice I ever made. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Ditto.
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Born in Minnesota so snow has a special place in my heart. Although I prefer to watch it through a window. When the kids get excited about it, it’s like magic is happening. My daughter is a huge winter fan. She talks about how she would beg to go out in snowfall & I would bundle her up to keep her warm. Made sense to me. She saw it differently…”Mom, I was bundled so snug I practically needed to be folded to get on my sled. I was a starfish!” This one brought back memories…& laughter, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked snow until I grew up, and had shit to do. It’s a love/hate deal. In your defense, it never hurts to be prepared in the elements. lol. Thanks for sharing a snow memory my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreRequiem for the berries Ripe on the tongue That once echoed In the new mown hayNow swallowed by darkTainted with decay A last breathA solemn pleaEternal graceNot granted to theeA wraith I have becomeA soul with no formFor a taste...
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Thank you for the collab. It came out nice.:))
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Yes it did.
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A wonderful write! Well done both of you Fia and Adagio! “)
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Thank you, M.E
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Thank you, M.E.
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Greetings, Fia & Adagio 🌾
To my mind’s-eye, this is an excellently rendered Freestyle co-write, with vividly creative metaphor, smooth syntax, spot-on rhymes (soft: form/harm), in a flawlessly dancing rhythm, emotional imagery that jerks startled nerve ends, and just the right amount of ambiguity to peak one’s interest and murder any trace of possible boredom.
I’ve heard rotten berries can be fatal 😵
Two masters weaving their best …
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Thank you.
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Oh, sure thing!
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Phenomenal write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian