This is achingly beautiful, Peter.

This stirs so many thoughts & emotions. Haunting…

Tugging on my heartstrings there.. so sad but so beautiful. I’ll think about this poem for awhile…thank you for sharing and also for opening my mind to the more meaningful things we take for granted… xx
~P.G💋

Thank you ladies..your are all too kind.💋💋💋

Powerfully penned, Nick. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Nick. Could feel these words my friend. Thanks for sharing. Appreciate you.

Damian

Very much is about needing that love to get you though and keep you human.

Haha. Yes, auto correct is all of our enemy. I get what you were saying and appreciate the read, friend 😁

You didn’t strike me as a jealousy type. But I like surprises! “)

Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Great spill my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

“Baby, you drank so much of me
I am seeping out of your pores”

What an amazing couplet this is. Wow. Every single line of this piece stands alone as so significant.

Great write. Jealousy can be a two way street. When two people are in love and there both the jealous type, that can be quite toxic.

damn good write

Superb writing.