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Read MoreBled out.Life left me, time to head for check out.Can’t shout.Wife left me, no doubt she took the same route.Nothing but strangers in this crowd...Red pools reflecting clouds and planes.Another bloody out-of-body experience.Mudded by heavy rains. Speeding through these...
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Remind me not to get in a car with you! Wow, it took me a hot minute to figure out what was happening. I love the rhyme you use – feels like an antagonistic relationship peaking with a bad turn. I like how you explore the moment of death, the voiceless reality of finality… except, I can hear you.
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Haha you’ll be safe, I promise!
I put this on paper when I heard about it on the news.
The husband tried to end their lives because he found out she cheated on him.I wrote this piece from her perspective at first but, even though I despise the husband, writing it from his point of view came across way more powerful in my opinion.
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Love the flow and vibes. Great ink
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Thank you for the kind words Nick!
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Drieks wrote a new post
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Read MoreHello?..I see you appear and vanish ever so slow.Can you see me?Will you believe me?-Dad?You have to believe me!My mind is a mess but my eyes are perfectly fine!-I need to rest... he says...One illness does not make me...
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Yes ma’am 🫡 haha
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A hypnotic journey into delusions and visions of madness. You’ve left me strapped up in a straitjacket.
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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post
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Read MoreEasy to get caught up in addiction Small taste to set some atmosphere One step from walking contradiction Some souls make others disappear Time wipes away fingerprints of life Memory is fleeting into the distance Goodbye stranger welcome to strife Growing numb with dull persistence Death hides...
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A poem of life, death, and time. Well done, Damian!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, M.E. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It sadly resonates with me…in the form of soul searching, in the process of healing.
Great write Damian ⚘️-
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jade. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This really hits so many issues in just one short poem. For some reason it brings to mind the insane deportations…families torn apart. Probably because that’s my fear, my daughter…Muse on, my friend. I’m here for it
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Some of that is in this write, good on you for spotting that. Well lets hope some more people wake up a grow a set. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, back.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Being an alcoholic who no longer partakes, I’ll say the biggest thing I’ve learned is how many people I hurt. When I was consumed by the disease, I couldn’t see that. I rationalized I was only hurting myself, that’s how hollow I had become. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wise words blended into a tight rhyming poem. You’re good at this stuff!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you so much, that means a lot me. Appreciate you.
Damian
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A philosophical and strong poem. Well done.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Mary… you’re too kind and dare I say sizzling hot😜
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And this is how we honor those lost & still keep going. Beautiful & poignant
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Thank you Willow for your comment
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Lovely piece! Very well written.
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Thanks for reading and the gold star.
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Beautifully penned, Peter. Incredible spill my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Beautiful
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Absolutely 💯 beautiful like others have said. I’m sure your friend loved it and very grateful to you.
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That was absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing Peter.❤️
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There’s a warmth in this that feels like a small flame kept alive. A blessing for the ones we carry.
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Thanks for reading and liking Grace or Curly?
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You’re welcome, Peter. Call me either, I don’t mine. 🙂
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Vivid imagery an incredible storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian