Beautifully penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! You know I love poems that have talk of music in them. Great write my friend. Love the layout and the creativity, nice execution on the difficulty. Appreciate you.

Damian

Groovy piece my friend. Lets a take a trip on a magic ocean. Everything will be real fine. Peace to you my dear friend.

Obrigado! ❤

Superb

Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.

Thank you, Wil;))l

Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Heavy! Like this a lot.

This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.

Tragic. He obviously needed help

Brutal and powerful work.

I can barely keep up with all this incest, Keith. This is worse than General Hospital. Where do you dream this stuff up? I’m standing on a ledge after reading it.