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Read MoreDeformed Siamese twin hanging from the flankThey thought he would die when removedHe survived and stronger he grew Don't enter room number 7There's some hideous freakHe consumes whatever his brother feeds himWhat he really enjoys is the taste of your...
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Watch it at 5:30pm when the sun is starting to go down. Thanks Fia.
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Visions this is outstanding horror poetry. You worked the imagery so well and created the scene like a great poet. Am impressed.
John
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Hello John. Thanks for the kind words. Appreciate the feedback.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian.
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I remember this film well. The sequals got silly. Great write.
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I agree. The sequals weren’t that great. This film is fun to watch. Also, great visuals of a dirty, gritty NYC during the early 80’s. Thanks Thomas.
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Read MoreNo rain tonightThe room is hot, too hotStill air and the smell of dampness creeps through my windowI'm alone and far away from homeMy life is now a chain of broken dream roomsI like it that wayI can't go...
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hi dearest Keith Happy Birthday?
this is very good but dark ❤️
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Thank you Brenda. Appreciate it. xo
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Death makes life easier somehow…. WOW….now why didn’t I think of that
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Hello Sam. It does, but then we can’t write poems or stories anymore. Thanks for the feedback.
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Visions this goes deep. I could feel the emotions of the narrator as he spoke. Fine work.
John
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Thank you kindly for the inspirational feedback here.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. This read like a letter left to fuck with cops kinda vibe. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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That was sort of what I was going for. Great observation my friend.
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Read MoreAs the full moon is risingin the misty nighthe visits the dead oneswith love in sight The graveyard soil he shoveto dig up and disemboweldigging the dustcraving for lust He opens the coffinwith trembling handsto fulfill his desiresand satisfy his demands The...
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hello dearest Keith so dark you know they always look best in gray ❤️
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HA! Yes they do. Thank you Brenda..xo
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Hauntingly penned, Keith. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks man. You rock!!
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Read MoreThe gates of hell are opened againRitual of Enoch is waking the deadThe priest is lifeless; it's time of the endMalevolent spirits dwell in the graves The zombies are lurking into the fogHungry for flesh and thirsty for blood City of...
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Zombies, always wondered why they stopped eating. If a bite turns them why continue to chew. Hmm? Nice
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Thanks Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Nothing like an old fashioned zombie flick. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciated. Thanks for all the feedback you send my way!
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This must be what Leonardo was thinking when he painted Mona Liza
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Thanks, Sam. I have no doubt that Da Vinci felt very close to the images he created.
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This is really quite wondrous Sam .. a compelling story poem from beginning to end .. I was once an aspiring artist (still am on the quiet) and so I can relate .. Subsequently awarded the dubble 👍👍
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Thank you, Neville. I’m glad you relate.
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I’m happy other writers are seeing your work. It deserves much more attention than just a few comments. I think I may have read this once before, but the emotion you’ve created is still like new. You know how to set a scene and deliver every time. Excellent story Sam.
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Thanks, Tim.
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Sam, you know I’ve read enough of your work that I am honest in my comments. So I can say I am so proud of what you have done here. This is quite spare, and all the more lovely because of it. You convey the beauty of the artist’s creation through his eyes rather than his brush, and the love he has lavished her with, not the paint. He might have no talent at all; but that is not what he sees — nor us, because of it. It is very fine, my friend, one of your very best.
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Thank you so much. Long before I tried to write stories, I smeared paint around on canvases–nearly always painting women. This story, then, wasn’t hard to write. Don’t know if you ever looked at my photos, but several examples of my artwork are there.
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I checked out your photos once before but didn’t see any paintings. Did so again just now, and at that other site, but no joy. Someone steal them, Sam?
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I don’t know how that’s possible. There are many drawings and several paintings there.
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Yes this is another one of those to watch when the sun it up. But I like the fact that he seeks revenge on those who wanted him dead.