This really pulls at the heart strings. graveyard of good meals… good line

A sharp expression.
Regards
James

You take erotic prose to the level of great literature. So many write erotic describing the scenes but you take the reader into the heart as well. The dance of dialogue is told with the artistry of a woman who knows the finesse of writing a great story. And you excel at that. I felt this as so much more that erotica. This is what literary sensual writing is when taken to the level of art. Your build the suspense like a Bach concerto with the conversation shifting back and forth with new revelations as the story unfolds. And the feelings dip and rise like notes in classical music. I am spellbound by your tale.

John