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Thanks for the thoughtful comment Fia.
It’s not right and it’s not wrong , it’s just the way it is.Like everything in life,even suffering is impermanent.
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Quite moving..thank you for sharing
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I’ve often felt that pain is preferable to apathy. That quiet passing out of space. This haunts & hurts. So often the case, & always hard
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First the Technical: Excellent consistency with meter, beautifully executed rhyme.
Composition: Incredible depth. As Willow noted, the piece reflects a falling away, a loss of touch and intimacy with no explanation. It’s a death of sorts, and you’ve painted it perfectly. Really well done.
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Read MoreI was just thinking that thinking is the root cause of all our suffering but please don't think about this or you'll suffer.You see thoughts are not thinking, are they?For example.Up ahead you see a person.That's the thought right...
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Thanks Indie for the thoughtful comment.
The human mind remains a mystery does it not?
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Killer piece my friend. A great poem to think about, especially if you sold your soul.
Question for you Damian…Did you sell your soul for Rock n Roll?-
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. No, I never went that far. lol. If I had and this was all the farther I got, then I would have got fucked on that deal. lol. I tend to complain sometimes, but this isn’t one of those times. Appreciate you.
Damian
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If ever there was a declaration for choosing your life wisely, this is it. We get one shot, make it count. And never sell out. I’d bookmark this if I could, so consider it bookmarked, my friend!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Honored to be a chapter in the book. Spot on in your interpretation. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Sometimes I feel like I sleepwalk through life. Especially since I work a lot. Great ink.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you liked the write my friend. It can be hard when one is working a lot, but I’ve read your work, you’re wide awake to the sleepwalking I’m speaking of. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moreyou found me shattered and alone so much hope you give to me take my life and take my soul I don’t need them when they’re broke heal me with those words you speak you’re no demon, a god damn angel ah body of a...
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Outstanding write. Love the wording and image. Nice job.
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I wrote this many years ago. Not even sure why I wrote it, but was always one I liked.
Thanks for the read, friend. Much appreciated.
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Beautifully penned, Nick. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you liked it. Thanks for the read, friend. I very much appreciate it.
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Okay, that is gut-wrenching. To lay there and live a slow death that you did not sign up for. Not right at all.
This is executed well