Powerfully penned, Nick. Brutally honest write my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

Damian

I like how in the first stanza, you start out hazy and that no cares, then the next you explain the addiction and how everyone should relate in one form or another, because there are so many different addictions. Then you come back at the end and want to know who your true friends are.
You lead the reader of this very nicely. Good write Nick;))

Another steamy masterpiece, you may disappear but when you return, it’s turnt up

Passionately penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend this is fire here. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerfully penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend. I dig this. Much respect.. Appreciate you.

Damian

Great piece of what’s up dude, we like this and the pic

This opening, “He stalks along the fringes of the Sub- conscious” is a great setup for this piece. You get a sense of foreboding.
Dump you in the lost and found and the leave you used up and broken. I mean wow. Very strong emotions. Like this piece.
Read it a couple of times

When you roll into soul excavation, you are at your most potent, my friend. This reads like a bell tolling or a fog horn blowing on a stormy night…Pay attention! Glad you brought this one back out of the archives.