Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The poem operates as a rite of declassification: the subject is neither bear, nor wolf, nor man, but the oscillation between all of them. And it is precisely in this instability that love appears—not as redemption, but as a force that anchors the untamed without domesticating it. Very well written, I like it very much.

This write is clever with a lot of twists molding into each other. And I love the red kite!
And the heartstrings. I’ll never look at them the same again. I love when you do steamy writes.
Never over done but with a few sharp edges – bringing the heat.
I can’t wait to see your book! And all the works you decide to put in it.

Love everything you do plus you;)

When we read this our mind mind thinks within the piece. Everything that we want is within the cave, truth of self and existence, safety in relation to everything within the cave, all emotions within the cave are real. Outside, there is darkness and every lie that it can hold, There are the teaming deceivers outside totally envious of the warm relationship within, snarling and gnashing their teeth at truth. Tight one dude

Beautifully written and so well thought out, even though you said your ideas were slammed together. It came together very well.

I dig the mix of spiritual and philosophical feel to this, delivered like spoken poetry, that rhythm that begs the reader (or listener) to lean in closer.
Great work.

It was a mess in my head for awhile, and this is the result of that jumble. LOL.
Funny how a few random ideas/lines can blend into something after all.
thank you, Damian!

Brilliant.

Thomas, I wish! But I’m keeping that accolade! I’ve been stabbing my head with a pen lately, trying to make my material worth the read. So thank you for the encouragement.

Dear B and S_D,

You capture and blend the essence and passion of women, earth and Mother Earth in this sizzling write. I enjoyed the ebb and flow of this work and how the process of collaborating yields great story telling. Congratulations to you both. H 🌷

hello beautiful Honoria from us both that is the tone she embodies… so it felt really natural to write this with her… thank you graciously from us both ❤️

great stuff, you two. Done just right. Plenty of descriptive moments to build the character into an active existence.

Passionately penned, Brenda & Sky. Excellent collaboration you two. Appreciate you, both.

Damian

hello dearest Naajir great wordplay here and a beautiful message while being a good look into your soul ❤️

Powerfully penned, Naaj. Excellent write with amazing wordplay my friend. Much respect always. Appreciate you.

Damian

Always searching for an opportunity to catch a photo of the old man on the mountain. My camera is never ready! He is quicker than he looks.

Intricate phonetics both personal and universal. Top notch word play, both fierce & peaceful. Much respect for this wilderness of word!

Excellent crafting here. Such a strong entry to compliment this site.
It does have an outdoorsy feel to it, but that could be the picture leading me that direction. At any rate,the words build the bear!

A beautiful blend of wit and wisdom, wrapped in a lilting montage of smooth vocals and kick-ass music for the heart, mind and soul. Wicked stuff, and I say, if you’ve got it, flout it, baby, flout it!

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian