You feel the weight of sadness in this one. pretend it is not a knock at a window. Shows how alone you felt

It’s just creative writing Brenda, I promise! I try to mix up the subjects and such. I don’t want to be too predictable!

Hello Tim!
This is not current event material. I’m mixing up my subject matter here and there, so as not to be too typical, yaknow?
Sometimes I read something and it inspires me to write my own thing from it. I get motivated by reading!

Thanks Damian. Me and Del are good! I just like to take my writing in different directions, like most of us do. I’m always learning and adapting, I hope.

But you are in my head when I write. When are you NOT in my head? LOL. I was going back and forth on this one, as far as how lyrical to make it. I forget what song I was listening to, that got me going on it. But eh, I’m leaving it as is for a bit. You know me!
And you know that I love you too babydoll. Smooch!

Raw with exasperation and the demand of desire

This is passionate. Like this Crimsin

Passionately penned, Brenda. Another excellent write my friend. I concur with Fia. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian