Powerfully penned, Brenda. Always layers in your writes my friend, this one does as well. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

As above, so below. As within, so without. Always you walk in the liminal light of esoteric thoughts. And always a pleasure to read 🌼

Ur on to bigger better things fresh start where did u go y haven’t you called miss ur face friend

Powerful work. Tremendous.

Hello Brenda. Mesmerizing piece of melancholy poetry. I can feel your pain and sadness. Your heart will find happiness with your new surroundings. All in time. xo

Ya know, I’ve learned to approach your kitchen with caution. You keep with high HEAT up in here! Embers are full blown blaze! 🔥

My words to this Embers would not be satisfactory. You stoked this to the point that the fire reignited, Jeezzz!
Really good.

I don’t know why it changed “cook” to “keep”…🤦‍♀️

Passionately penned, Naaj. This write is fire my brother, fucking blazing! Much respect. Appreciate you.

Damian

My, my my. I had to take time to inhale this comment! Thank you, Adira for your sharing your energy.
It’s so deeply appreciated.

Grandma knew exactly what to do with us. 6 of us & she never lost her temper. Good memories…Thank you, girl

hello beautiful Willow this was a twist I didn’t know where you were going it’s very clever and relateable I had to clean my dad’s grandfather clock when naughty 💕

Brilliantly penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! Amazing storytelling my friend, I can relate. Not that I got in trouble a lot, but when I did, not a fun time by any means of the imagination. Excellent work, as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

I love “old timey” pieces. It brings back the good ol days, even if we didn’t know that they were, then. I would’ve preferred the chair over the usual ass whuppin.
But eh, I survived.
It’s always interesting to me how others lived and dealt with their own upbringings. This was a wonderful story indeed. I raised my kids on “time out” instead of spankings, as your story reflects. It’s a better choice.
Very entertaining write, Willow. Bravo.

It’s good to see YOU here, too.

Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Amazing dark write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

The light only blinds and befuddles us, while darkness softly and thoroughly embraces our truth, regardless. There is indeed something special about nothingness -the void- where everything and nothing is possible.

Superb write, my friend!

hello Mary thank you graciously lovely one 💕

I suffered from it when I was younger for various reasons. Your poem spotlights it in an artistic way. Excellent poem crimsin.

Powerful work. Tremendous.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. I have had problems keeping friends as well, I can totally relate. Superb write. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hello Brenda. Magnificent piece of writing here. So many suffer with loneliness and depression. It’s not a good feeling at all. Stellar work my friend. xo