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    Not Worth Saving?

    you gave me up as lost to the devilI let you go for much the same reasonyou just don't see it I'm of a mind to believe...if you observe...and do nothing...your hands are just as dirty  you want to save me?where...

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    • hello beautiful Willow there are no answers sometimes for these kind of questions and if you got a response it’s not likely going to be one you like heartfelt and deep write🌹

    • Powerfully penned, Willow. Amazing lyrics, really loved the musical style and arrangement my friend. Love the bass and drums starting the second verse for those first bars, before the guitar comes in on the last bars. Excellent work. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • Thank you! On pieces this close to my emotions, I always know when it feels right because I get goosebumps & cry. I appreciate your comment on this one, my friend

    • Powerful and sad. I felt this one. Great writing.

    • I was so angry when I wrote it, & so sad. Hopefully I was able to convey that even a little. She’ll never admit her part. It is what it is. Thank you, girl

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    my divinity

    expanding my thoughts I risetouching the air and skyscintillating feelings surgeand I am transported to that magical placewhere I can be anythingnot bound by my mortal coilrather anchored to my bodyshould I wander to far into the abyssopening my...

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    immortal

    it's all relevant to our magicsome spill sweet endeavors from their lipsothers from their swaying hipsheeding no warning, just letting go tasting the aether and spinshadows swirl, and the mists enteryou and I are part of the skywe are a...

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    • It sounds like you’re describing the perfect world where imagination is just a word on earth, but means so much more in the world you describe.

      • hello dearest Tim I wrote this last night while listening to and watching this video there I imagine the boys are learning magic it makes me think of the book where the wild things are and the place they is so magical looking thank you for showing love for this write 💕

    • thank you graciously beautiful poetess I love your response 💕

    • Beautifully penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend, spectacular imagery. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    covet

    taste the energy as it wraps around yousinging to your soul a sirenborn of darkness and lusttipping things in my favorrevealing enough to tantalizebut not to drive insanemysterious minx with a passionlooking at you through the mistsa tingle shivers...

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    strange

    creative flaw or simple geniusmy soul is differentbut I wonder if similar qualities can be found in Godfrightful honesty, I see the same snag in humanitysome are streamlined and sleak to look at but get to know them and...

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      • hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you graciously sometimes I wonder if my writes aren’t strange but you have to go as inspired I’m happy this spoke to you 💕

    • WHEN I SAY I FELT THIS, IT MEANS
      I THIS EVERY EVERY WORD OF YOUR VOICE…BUT THIS RIGHT HERE, OOUUFF!

      “truthfully I fail in this mission every day
      with small steps forward
      becoming the companion that was first desired”

      DAMN IT WOMAN!

    • that didn’t come out right, emotionally everywhere but you know what mean, ha!

      • hello dearest poet thank you graciously good evening I wasn’t sure how this one would be accepted I’m so happy it spoke to you 💕 and yes I think your comment was great and I understood 😊

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. I think it’s something everybody fails at, myself included. It’s not meant to be easy, and sometimes are human nature gets the best of us. Very introspective write my friend. I can relate. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you graciously dearest Damian for understanding I hate like for example when I am short tempered I have to work on this 💕

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