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Read MoreQuietly I ache to a reality I'll never wake. Though the glimmers of such soothes me, it is never enough to quell this heartache. Quietly I ache, to conceal wounds, I truly cannot. Though it was a natural forethought. Quietly I ache, tormenting aches of these...
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It speaks volumes to what I’m feeling now
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The words create a heaviness in this piece. Well said but filled with so much sorrow. Be well my friend.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Can feel the sorrow and depth of this piece my friend. Great spill. Appreciate you.
Damian
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The repeated phrases make such a punctuation point in this aching piece.
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I think the idea of death is both scary and peaceful to me. To finally have that moment of nothing sounds good. But nothing also is terrifying as it is unknown. What is after nothing? But yeah, peace one day.
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Amazing piece. DAMN Good Daniel. You’re a great storyteller!
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And this is only the first draft. I am considering making it into a full length novel.
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Brilliantly penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As always Damian, thank you!
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Read MoreI am merely a black silhouette in the room. Something plagued by the dreaded psychosis. I am a burnt-out shell of my summery youthful self. These days every moment has a wintry hallucination – flurries of racing thoughts rage in the lacerating gales...
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Violent, dark, horrific. My kind of poem. Nice work Danial.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. A chilling write my friend. Nicely executed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreLet the storm within outRaging internallyManifests woundsCreates painWhen you are doneCome lay your headListen to my steady heartDo not feel lost and aloneI will guide youLook for the lightIn the infernal darknessLet the tears flowCascading in rivulets on meI...
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Thank you, Will
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Lovely piece Fia. Great work here.
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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Beautifully penned, Fia. This was a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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Look for the light in the darkness. Such a beautiful write, Fia. Bravo!
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Thank you Daniel ☺️
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feels very comfortin
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Thank you, Ambjr 😊
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The everyday can just be heavy. The moment I get to come home to my wife and pets makes it all worth it. Great ink
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Read MoreSummer Pleasure Hard and supple it lies in my hand Too big for my fingers to enclose Giving off a delicious aroma ofSun kissed strawberry fields andFiery spices at Oriental bazaars Expectantly, my naughty tongue Touches the tip, wandering around In...
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A succulent poem Sappho. The wording, the image and the entry into summer makes this poem a delicious treat. GREAT!!
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It’s always a pleasure to read your kind and supportive comments, dear Keith! Thank you! Xoxo
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Beautifully penned, Sappho. Great imagery my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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And I appreciate you and your kind comment very much, dear Damien!
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Yeah, summer is truly a lovely season. Thank you very much for reading and commenting, Will!
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I often wish I were an ice cream cone and even more so after reading this. Well done. 🙂
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This is so sad. I feel this Daniel.