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    You want a Session?

    Why don’t you come up to my room No one has to know what we do I promised to give you the ultimate ride Slick and ready, slide inside   You want me to get on all fours So you can have access to my...

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  • A Ballad to Iambics.... (poetic rhythm)

            A Ballad to Iambics....                      Within your voice a tune is born,            iambics turn to song …            through every line, such words...

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    • Simply stellar writing…
      No critique whatsoever.

      • Thank you, Drieks 🙏
        I am so very glad to see you, and truly do appreciate your positive comments for this dancing, rhythm-based piece on iambics.

        Bless your day with sunny smiles of gratitude! ⁓ Richard🖌

    • I’m so hypnotized by your voice, Richard. I particularly love how you use enjambment so efficiently and eloquently. What a beautiful word choice… ‘beshackled mystery’. My spell check does not like that word, but I love it. I’m into iambic bondage. Hands behind my back. Wrists crossed. Let your chains caress my pulse.

      • Hi, Sweetness🍷

        Aw, M’Dear … I am sooo sorry to have missed your gorgeous, sensually embracing sentiments, exalting tributes, and sigh-worthy vulnerabile tease … ohhh-MY!

        Damned this site for not sending email notifications that I have reviews, messages, comments, etc; Fia’s working on this for me.

        Been missing your masterfully intelligent, wondrously skillful self … if I knew where you are, I’d lasso you and pull me into there … hint*

        Cozy thank you hugs, ‘n other dreamy stuff! ⁓ Rascally Richard ⚤

    • “Tingles” (in the right spot) can be so sweetly enjoyable, eh? ; )

      Thank you ever-so warmly, Ma’am….
      I must admit delightfully taking pleasure in how your reviews always bless my senses a certain surge of enthralling vibration, too.
      That you think this piece is sophisticated and nicely done, indeed, makes every stroke (of my pen … wink*) feel so satisfyingly enjoyed.

      Happiest hugs to Thee, Lady-Adira! ⁓ Richard🖌

    • Gorgeous, Richard. Just that simple. Shakespear would be jealous. I appreciate the metaphorical allusions, and particularly the dialogue – which is most unusual for poetry. It’s top shelf seductive and intellectually riveting. The ‘Old English’ format adds a gothic aura reminiscent of a time long passed when chivalry ruled romantic endeavors and touching held high esteem in the realm of erotic motion.

      xoxo

      • Why is it, Lovely Dearest Mio 🥀

        The site leaves your passionate bard adrift upon a sea of longing anticipation in receiving the beauty of your voice’s succulently inviting kiss’s touch ~ ‘gainst his fawning, ardent ear.

        Because we flow the same wavelength, there’s no one I’d rather composer for or share with than You, M’Lady Faire.
        A lingering hug ‘n a warm, wet kiss,
        a caress of sweet undulating bliss …
        can you imagine more delight than this?
        (ohhh, I think you can … LOL!)

        Thank you ever-so delightfully for your always gracious sentiments.
        I sooo miss you ya know, Dear Megan ⁓ Richard ✨🍂✨

  • The "FLIRT" (teasing)

    The "F L I R T"How can you say you doubt my love is true,when you are all the world to me, and more?No more devoted could I be to you …though true, there's other ladies I adore.You say...

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    • You truly have iambic meter down to an art, Richard, but you’ll never get away with ogling other girls at the bar. We are always watching your eyes – the windows to your soul. Kisses are a dime a dozen, but a wink in a crowded room – that’s a fortune in affection.

      xoxoxo

      • Ohhh, kind, sweet Megan ~ sighhh! 🍇

        Once more, I’m lucky to have discovered more sparkling treasure from your beautifully gifted mind ‘n heart left upon my ever-grateful page … I’m sorry to be so late in response, M’Love, it’s the site, again leaving me in the dark.
        You’ve sooo sweet bragging on my skill, but it’s yours that equals/eclipses mine in every work of yours I’ve so fully, so thankfully, enjoyed the pleasures of. x0x

        HAH! You girls are every bit as flirty as us guys … it’s when we flirt with the one we’re with that sparks truly fly, igniting a full evening’s glow into a trove of romantically sensual delights.

        WINK* ⁓ Rascal 🍓

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    Pill

    Bloodshot eyes stare wildly Just looking for a reasonChemicals come on mildly Within the mystic season Watching stars drift slowlyI cast my gaze inwardWalking amongst the lowlyMy skin feels awkward Panic races through fearWalking across the wireMuted sound going clearAs my pulse spikes...

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    • Pills are dangerous. This piece was written with power & a great performance here. Well done!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That they are, I know from experience. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • How seductive the call of pharmaceuticals. Health, happiness, sanity.. all disintegrated by one seemingly harmless cure.
      Excellent write, my friend!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Detritus. So glad you connected with the write my friend. They’d have you think, they wanna get people hooked. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I am sure he would be impressed by your ability to adapt to his style, which is not easy. This has a good flow and rapid pace

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I released it on DU, he commented on it, I think it was with approval. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • He does have a machine gun style, doesn’t he? Quick bites! It doesn’t seem to matter what style you’re using, you always manage to bring it home on point, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well thank you, I try, I try. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He saw it on DU, I think he approved, if I remember right. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I like this style. Reminds me of a poet I knew. I think his name was JustDave. He had a bit of this style as well. Great ink.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool, yeah I’ve seen this style around a few times. Not too often though. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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