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Agree with Raven. That is one helluva solid landing at the end
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Thank you, Willow xoxo
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Some endings never end, others end before they’ve really begun, but always the questions remain. Well played 🌼
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Thank you, Average Joe xoxo
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Powerfully penned, Fia. You stuck the ending my friend, love the sleight of hand on the last line. Very clever, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian xoxo
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Daniel, I love your stories; you do bring them to life.
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible storytelling, amazing imagery my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Daniel this is magnificent. My eyes were riveted to the screen as your tale unfolded. A work of dark literary quality that was incredible to read. Truly a publishable story. Knowing this is just a chapter in your book amazes me. Truly fantastic story telling.
John
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Read Morethere came a time when what I had so long denied in truth…deeply buried refusing to acknowledge it (because truth...was more than I could carry)it erupted...and all sound went silent for a frozen moment a vacuum whine slowly building sharp in the back of my mind (and I...
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Terrific write Willow….very very good.🙏
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Thank you, Peter. That means a lot to me
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All I have is a pen, girl, no sword. But what do they say? The pen is mightier than the sword?
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The opening of this with the whispering was perfect. I can feel your words through the music nice melding.
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Thank you, Fia
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Bella. Bravissima! 🌼
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Many thanks!
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! The arrangement worked nicely with the words, whispers well placed, the piano was also a great choice. Amazing work my friend, excellent execution. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This one is actually part of my book, From the Ashes. I always know when I have the music/vocals right when they make me cry. It takes me back to that moment, that feeling when I wrote it. I’ll be putting a number of my healing era pieces up over time. Clearing the pipes, as it were. Thank you, my friend. Your words mean more than I can express
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🙃🖊🗡
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Thank you so much. Life’s little stumbles…
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Such eloquent passion and imagery. This definitely moves the imagination and the spirit
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This was the beginning of my evolution. Thank you, my friend
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Read More'You're way too pessimistic, Yersinia!' the young woman with the cheeky red dyed short haircut exclaimed and took a sip of her tea glass. The Oriental beauty sitting opposite to her at a table for two in a small tea...
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Powerfully penned, Elke. A very clever write my friend, it kinda shows that humans never seem to learn. Excellent work, with a great message. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much for reading and writing such a kind and highly appreciated comment, dear Damian!
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Interesting take on pandemics. They certainly were not handled very well, but the vaccine for the modern one was was handed out fairly, in general. It was new territory so mistakes were made. I got all my shots and am glad of it. I do agree that there were too many restrictions put on the public at least here in the US.
This piece really made me feel like I was sitting there with the two ‘women’. You certainly have a talented pen Elke. To be transported to the moment you describe is really a rare and wonderful talent. I’m happy the you share it with us. I’d be happy to slip and fall in your direction. 😉 💙-
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Your appreciation and encouragement made my day, dear Jim! 1001 times thank you!
Of course I exaggerated in my writing but anyway, I think that every crisis comes along with a learning task. I’m afraid, concerning the Corona pandemic humankind has failed the test.
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You are a very good storyteller. To board people in their own homes to prevent the spread …yeah history did repeat itself with that. The difference is that people spoke online and got used to that, then speaking face to face. Thought-provoking piece.
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Thank you so much for your kind and supportive comment dear Fià! There are even more parallels: in times of the plague, many people tried to overcome their helplessness and desperation by celebrating hilariously on graveyards and other scary places. On these occasions people used to wear facial masks!
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Thank you, Raven xoxo