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Read MoreBallerinas of glassdiamond scatter upon kitchen floor Bottles sink from handsas submarines failing to find home At the hospice karaokeinvitations to dance die like whisperswithin photograph framesbeside the coldest beds Mindy McCready tribute actlocked drunk jaw to the theatreat end of furthest...
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my scribbles often jag around like a crap jigsaw puzzle. the mindy stanza is just illustrative of troubled music souls. melissa was just an exploitative douche (i was 24, she was 40) and she played me like a guitar.
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Third stanza is amazing. Hospice Karaoke to me is representative of the routines folks get into before they pass when they are at those facilities. It is a reminder of how life is already gone before it actually is.
Your jigsaw puzzles are quite creative and fun to try to put together.
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I’m pleased you find some creativity within the puzzles. Pleasure to meet you J.
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Pleasure to meet you, Ghosteen. I am a transplant from WC, was on that since 2008.
I am liking it here so far, and getting some inspiration to start banging the keys again.
j.
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If our minds rust…pieces will fall away…memories might be gone and that could be sometimes a good thing and at others a bad thing.
I felt the emotion here…you lent it to me while I was reading.
j.
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Read MoreIgnoring the Billboards of Morality the impasse of logic when the bypass is tragic the psychotic foresees the victim hiding within the trees of fate cornered seen in peripheral vision too late the little ones grew as the lewd troll eschewed the traffic with no stop lights no signs of stoppage just those of yielding to what's coming from the right in dead of...
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I get the driver ignored what was happening on the side of the road in the woods? Interesting piece
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Lately, haven’t been able to help getting political, with this crazy climate. Thank you, Fia.
j.
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Brilliantly laid, Jacob,
It’s gone wayyy too far when one’s political views are taken so seriously by the opposing radical factions that they’ll get ya killed.
It couldn’t have been put better than V1.I love the Freestyle work, and really dig your title … the voice of present day, and enduring past’s as-well. There’s nothing new about crazy people.
It’s hard to say thanks to this, My Friend, but poetically speaking, I wholeheartedly do! ⁓ Richard🖌
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It is such a travesty, all that is going on now in the world and in the world of political climate.
I am so disheartened.
But thank you for your kind review.
j.
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Terrific write
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hello dearest Benny thank you graciously❤
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we own our choices good or bad. And for those we regret, we can ask forgiveness and do what we can of good deeds to even up the ledger. Similar to what the Chorus in Oedipus spoke of at his end.
Fate took him in one direction…he attempted to take himself as far as he could in the other before his death.
Really good piece.
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hello dearest Jacob I do my best and it is hard to let go of regret but I ask forgiveness and I do try to focus on being positive thank you for your thoughts on this❤
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I really appreciate an honest piece like this. The inner monologue was captivating. Thanks for sharing it.
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thank you graciously dearest poet I often do that I’m happy it worked for you ❤️
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Read MoreOkay, Renee, The next shot is the whiskey shot. And I’m telling you, I’m feeling the waves of danger rolling off him over here.” Elene said. Looking over her shoulder at him.“ Your feeling the waves?” I said, smiling...
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Sorry, it took me a bit to get to read this. Excellent storytelling my friend, you are truly amazing, cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for even reading my work. Never rush cuz, we are good
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Sounds like her mind was all over the place and things got out of hand