So, you are saying our task is to follow ourselves. Nice. Welcome to Stars Rite.

Thank you for the warm welcoming Fia
You are not wrong about your assertion. In addition- I would say we have to see our faults and try to be aware “to not fall inside”

Short, cute, deep — as are our holes. I have surely fallen in my own, many times, and struggled to climb out. Then I fell into a massive one, which I will never escape. But that’s okay, it’s just my wife, and we have been deep in each other for more than 33 years. Nice stuff, Brad.

hello dearest Brad you are very clever I like the way you think ❤️

Aww Fire and ice can go together, and you proved it with this write.

Strangely erotic this piece, at least for me.

Nice work Elke

Hahaha, dark romance, freaking awesome

What a hot, sizzling piece. Love the wording and description here. SEXY!!!! Your poetry always shines Elke..xoxox

Well damn! I wasn’t expecting that ending!
(The moon was bad ass that night, wasn’t it!)
The rhymes bind the lines together really well. It was a very sweetly carried poem, until you devour your beau! LOL.
Awesome read!

I feel that it would be worth it.

Darkly romantic just how I like it, hehe.

Passionately penned, Elke. What a lovely dark write with a touch of romance, nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

A forest of stepping stones on to the ornaments of beautiful life surrounded by the dark velvet of memories.

The dark velvet of memories… Thank you so much for your poetic comment, dear Adagio!

The darkness has a power of its own at times. Especially when one is alone and thinking of someone that sets them on fire with lust. This is one of those dark writes, but an alluring one to. Well done, crimsin. 🙂

Your poetry lives deep within my heart forever. Even if I don’t get a chance to read your work for a few weeks, your words and poetry always amaze me. xo

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Aww she sounds like she has everything under control. Nice;))

I love this tribute to the Calico Queen–her confidence, elegance, and sly playfulness leap off the page! She reminds me so much of my tuxedo cat with her gorgeous green eyes — my cat is such a girly girl tho, she leaves the hunting to her big brother, she doesn’t want to get dirty lol. But she rules the house with just as much grace and charm.

I have a male orange tabby who has the mentality of a dog. I’ve had cats all my life, at times, multiples. I love adopting when I can, even the older ones that have a tendency to be overlooked. I don’t believe a house is a home without one – a dog or a cat, or whatever you choose. They all need love, and it seems to me your calico queen has taken over the residence, quite nicely!

Thanks for the nice comment, Kelly. 🙂

Beautifully penned, Tim. Cats are spectacular companions. Mine passed away a few summers back, a year apart. They lived to the age of 20 & 21 respectively. They seen me at my worst and my best. Appreciate you.

Damian