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Amethyste wrote a new post
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Read MoreMy museI love youYou are my strength on weak daysI live for doing youYou are my ultimate pleasure.
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Yes she has traveled with me too. I can tell in many ways that she is my love. 🙂 Thank you for reading. Take care.
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Beautiful. You got to love the muse.
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Yes indeed. Thank you for stopping by and reading Thomas. A good day ahead for you.
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Read More“I don't feel pain, I don't feel alive, yet no angels in the bright moonshine.” The lady of sorrow confided to herself aloud in a whisper. One so delicate, it could vanish like flying dust should she be loud. But she was standing stoically at...
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Pretty cool, Daniel. I like the visions that it creates easily for the reader. With an artistic flair of course.
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The opening lines set a fragile, haunting mood that carries through the poem beautifully.
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Read More"hills to climb" A figure counted once,standing where the verge breaks open.Word intact, meaning thinned,a marker left upright by habit alone. Grass leans in, listening.Its tilt becomes direction,though the ground beneath itslides in its own quiet argument. Your craft appears sideways—a pattern...
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Nice.
I was told ages ago that it’s a flaw in writing to give inanimate things the ability to do conscious things, like the grass leaning to listen, as if it knew to.
Yet, I argued that in creative writing, comes a creative freedom to paint things in a different light. To give it that “as if”.
That’s what makes it more interesting and even unpredictable.
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Took out the “as if” during the edit to tighten the line. It’s like jumping into coloured chalk floor paintings and let Mary Poppins take care of the rest. And yes, I was told that too. But then again poetic licence, freedom of speech and creative expression all say otherwise. Thanks for your much valued visit. Truly grateful for the word you left here as well. 🙏🕊️
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Dear K,
Even your summary waxes poetic. I enjoyed this piece because the inanimate had something to offer. It was a lovely image seeing and feeling the energy transfer from one thing to another throughout the write. Lovely piece. H🌷
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Thank you, dear Honoria, for keeping that energy in transfer-flow. Now, even after the poem has rested from its reading a work it began continues on. Most appreciatively, K.
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Passionately penned, Amethyste. Photographs and Memories as the old Jim Croce song goes. There was a change of temperature with this write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I appreciate your feedback.
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Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write my friend. My muse has traveled many roads with me. Appreciate you.
Damian